First Date Song (poem) by Felix LeRoy Perry on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on May 14, 2009

Ahhh how lovely . Young love.

hugs
Kat

Reviewed on May 11, 2009

I love that song "Tonight you're mine, completely, you give yourself to me so freely..." My first was a waste of time, it was like "uh, what just happened?" nontheless, I had a bad crush still.lol

Reviewed by Sheila Roy

Reviewed on May 5, 2009

An excellent job setting the mood in this poem, Fee. You take us there. Love and Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed by Nance O'Donnell (Reader)

Reviewed on May 5, 2009

Awesome Fe.
Enjoyed this, good write.
You have such a way with words, lets the imagination run away.
Hugs Nance

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on May 5, 2009

I guess most of us had a night to remember as we started out in life Cuz, as you said some was magic, some terror, some frustraiting and SOME were a crime. I know I fit in there somewhere. OH ya all of the above. Thank you for sharing.

Love ya face Cuz XOXOXO, Rose

Reviewed by L. Figgins

Reviewed on May 4, 2009

Fantastic, Fee! Nostalgia is such a wonderful facility and we sometimes remember in the memory's favor--but the first time? Let's just say it could only get better(thank the stars)and leave it at that! Lol at Ed M...

Reviewed by Linda Law

Reviewed on May 4, 2009

Good writing Fee.... Thing is I never had this "moment" until after I married...but love is such a nice thing, no matter when! I love that romantic side of your personality that comes thru your writing!!! Hope you are feeling better... hugs & stuff, lindalaw

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on May 4, 2009

Well I can still remember and fantazize Georg. lol

Fee

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on May 4, 2009

Yes, I think I do, because this poem make me remember it, oh boy! then was terror, yes! terror! because if a girl got knocked just by tongue kissing...that first time all the way for both, was a sure thing for me to start calling my self "daddy"

Georg

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on May 3, 2009

Fee, this is sweet and beautifully innocent. And the ending...perfect!

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on May 3, 2009

beautiful and nostalgic! of course, I do remember!

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on May 3, 2009

ah, The butterflies in the stomach..eyes that twinkle..to the dance of all dances....Magical!
Hugs,
Christine

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on May 3, 2009

Remember the first time...? Hell, its been so long I can't remember the last time...e