When... (poem) by Felix LeRoy Perry on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Sheila Roy

Reviewed on October 22, 2010

Beautifully written, Fee. One for the vaults:)
Sheila

Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)

Reviewed on October 21, 2010

Beautiful, romantic poetry...
Always,
Deborah

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on October 20, 2010

B E A U T I F U L dear cuz as I could hear you recite this with tender love and care.

Love ya face Cuz XOXOXO, Rose

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

Reviewed on October 20, 2010

BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on October 19, 2010

Awww, all the power of love wrapped in the lines of romance that are held tightly within your heart...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Jon Willey

Reviewed on October 19, 2010

I savored this like a piece of sumptuous chocolate candy Felix. A romantic encounter straight from your heart obviously my friend. One cannot successfully create such work sans the personal experience. Love and peace to you. Jon Michael

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on October 19, 2010

Fee, This is absolutely gorgeous.... :)
hugs,
Chrissie

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on October 19, 2010

Sweet sentiments, Fee. Thank you for sharing them. You mean to write "its" (the possessive)in the first verse as opposed to "it's" which means "it is." Sorry, that's a pet peeve of mine as a language teacher. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila

Reviewed on October 19, 2010

Lovely write, Fee.....penned by a romantic soul....loved it!

Hugs,
Anna

Reviewed by J'nia Fowler

Reviewed on October 19, 2010

Enjoyed the perfect cadence of this poem. Thank you for sharing. J'nia

Reviewed by Stephen Cherring

Reviewed on October 19, 2010

Perfect layout! perfect theme! perfect poem!
good 1 Fe..

Reviewed by Christine Tsen

Reviewed on October 19, 2010

A blissful poetic experience, exquisite words.
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by neerja gandhi (Reader)

Reviewed on October 19, 2010

its soooo beautiful...have no words...just enjoyed it....

Reviewed by YADUVANSHI NEHA

Reviewed on October 19, 2010

beautiful romantic piece...

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on October 19, 2010

Another beautiful and romantic write, Fee....you are the master of these.

Reviewed by Deborah Tornillo

Reviewed on October 19, 2010

Fee: Beautiful, absolutely beautiful - you are so gifted.

Deborah

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on October 19, 2010

so sweet-lovely-beauitful!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on October 19, 2010

When can be Wonderful.

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

Reviewed on October 19, 2010

each line Fee is so tenderly beautiful
I am also so moved by the last stanza
when there is walking hand in hand
love's bounty for sure

Moon Drops
Vickie

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on October 19, 2010

an outstanding soft and romantic write
thanks for sharing
Peace be with you

William