If we could buy a beach shack
A private place for us to share
I’d hitch-hike across a continent
If you would only meet me there
We'd walk barefoot over sand dunes
Live in just our bathing suits
Get in rhythm with the ocean’s tides
They'd entwine our mortal roots
We’d catch dinner from the ocean
Watch for midnight falling stars
I’d make up stories to amuse you
About our magic trip to Mars
I’d play you love songs by a fire
When the sunset stole the day
And when the mermaids came to visit
With them we’d surely play
When the fire-flies said goodnight to us
Hand in hand to walk content as one
To the lumpy bed inside our beach shack
To make sweet love now that day is done….
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Reviews of "Beach Shack Lovin'"
Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)
Reviewed on August 14, 2011
Fee, Water,Dunes,Songs,Fire,Sunset--a prelude
to making love. How sweet this is!
Such imagery that I can relate to, so fresh from my trip to Prince Edward Island.
The Maritimes, particularly this exquisite island, has captured my heart. Wonderful wonderful poem!
Blessings,
Christine
this is great! A super romatic write. ~ Morgan .....affording the shack wouldn't be the problem it's the insurance right? That's not a very romantic commnet huh??? :(
When Miranda Nolan inherits a house she soon discovers a need to solve the mysteries surrounding the late owner along with resolving the strong attraction she feels for a co-claimant who lost his hearing and faces a world of silence.
Audrey and Sue, both 42, took a trip to England completely paid for by Audrey's cheating millionaire boyfriend. “Cougar” describes older women on the prowl for much younger men, and although they didn't begin the trip on the prowl, somehow they bec
to making love. How sweet this is!
Always,
Deborah
Now a little day dreaming...mmmm
Carole~
sheila
Deb
The Maritimes, particularly this exquisite island, has captured my heart. Wonderful wonderful poem!
Blessings,
Christine
Hugs,
Anna
Love ya face Cuz Hugs XOXOXO, Rose
hugs,
Chrissie
Nicely done once again, Fee. Good to see you back and rejuvenated.
Much peace, love and light,
Amber
This one takes me there, nicely done Fee. Thanks Dick
Joy L. Hale