My Inner Beast (poem) by Carole Mathys on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on October 17, 2005

i like your style

Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)

Reviewed on October 9, 2005

Very well said Carole. Excellent poem to remember and keep.
So true!
Tracey xoox42(c :)

Reviewed on October 7, 2005

"Brrrrrrrrrr.";) Carole, you have described the beast that is in
me. . .er, I mean us. . .too well. Rhyme in your hands deliciously effective. Encore!! 'Pea' <3

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on September 19, 2005

So that's the diabolical killer that comes out of nowhere and does away with philandering hubby. On theme with a rhyming scheme. Will try to steer clear of her dark side.

Ron

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on August 26, 2005

I can relate to this, Carole. I love the spark of hope at the close of your creation. Thank you. Love and peace to you.

Regis

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on August 26, 2005

I, too, know the inner beast. An excellent write that far too many, I'm afraid, will identify with. BRAVA!

Thank you for having the courage to write and post this one--

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :(

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen

Reviewed on August 25, 2005

Amen. Very well said, indeed, Carole. Love your stuff.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on August 24, 2005

Ah, yes, that place deep inside you, but alas and drat, sometimes that old inner beast has already defiled that special place and we have to seek shelter elsewhere. Good poem and I know whereof you speak.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on August 24, 2005

A truly powerful piece, Carole - and very sage advice at the end.

Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed on August 24, 2005

Outstanding poetic composition. "My Inner Beast" flows from Erato's
fountain to Minerva's lake, singing the mysteries of the mind.

I have enjoyed the reading of "My Inner Beast", and am enriched with this treasure of American Fine Letters.

I salute You, Poet!

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on August 23, 2005

excellent treatise of the darks forces surrounding our nature ...

Reviewed by Richard Christopher Suarez (Reader)

Reviewed on August 23, 2005

Carole ....You wrote your butt off on this dark
descriptice piece.
Really Really Grand!!!
peace',
Rich Criso Suarez

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on August 23, 2005

Dark write Carole!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on August 23, 2005

The cause of private hell. If only he could be purged for all time...

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on August 23, 2005

Very dark descriptive write!

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on August 23, 2005

excellent lines; you truly are a master at this! very well done, poetess; i salute you! BRAVA!!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D

Reviewed by Sue Hess

Reviewed on August 23, 2005

wise words carole, that inner beast is certainly in us all

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on August 23, 2005

Carole you have depicted the inner beast brilliantly! A superb message/poem with a splendid last stanza! Thanks for sharing!

Love,
Eileen