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Under The Sky
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~ Under The Sky ~


 


Lying under the sky


remembering smells


and sounds of home


Grass that is green and lush


with trees and singing birds


the sounds of children


playing ball in the park


where once I played


The smells of


mom’s home cooking


the sounds of the church bells


as the choir sings


These thoughts I remember


as here I lay


under a foreign sky


in a ditch made of sand


above me the clouds


are billowing black smoke


from incendiary bombs


the sounds filling the air


are gunfire


I didn’t hear the sound


of the bullet that hit me


Now I am laying here


under a foreign sky


my eyes wide open


unseeing


 


© 2005


Carole Mathys


 


 


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 Reviews of "Under The Sky"
Reviewed by Joyce Hale
Reviewed on October 16, 2005
What a write, Carole! Stunning and eye-opening! Tragic and sad! You have a gift!

Peace. Joyce

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on October 15, 2005
Nostalgically captivating, Carole. Thank you for sharing this offering. Love and peace to you.

Regis

Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)
Reviewed on October 13, 2005
Oh Carole, This poem just brings the tears flowing and the chills running through me. A Beautiful poem and tribute to those giving up everything for us! Beautiful Carole. Brings a total silence from the reality. Beautiful. Put this on google for all to read and remember
Tracey xoox42(c :)

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on October 13, 2005
Carole
this one is magnificent write
stunning ending
so Well Penned

William

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on October 12, 2005
a profound capture of war's futility!

Reviewed on October 12, 2005

The visions of the wise observer were poemized by a heart that pumps
sublimity to write with lettras of wisdom.

It's a privilege to read this poetic composition, "Under The Sky".

Thank You, Poet!


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on October 12, 2005
Most outstanding ..with a "wham" ending!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on October 12, 2005
Stunning! This was a total surprise poem Carole! You really captured the essence in a way that brings it home with a knock-out punch!
Excellent work!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed on October 12, 2005
Powerful write, Carole; so very well done! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(

Reviewed on October 12, 2005
Carole,

I didn't expect that ending--WOW. Powerful, jarring write that will linger for a while...thank you.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :(


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