~ The Veranda ~
I picture four women on a veranda
four Southern women in straw colored hats
and gauzy dresses with lace covered fans
They were having a conversation,
and it was hot
their hankies were tucked in cleavages
where eternal trickles of perspiration ran
from the female breast bone to
exotic vacation spots
that Southern men often dream about
These Southern ladies were a mixture
of cotton candy and pink champagne
part calico choir girl
and part satin dance hall doll
They were sweet smelling, coy, cunning
voluminous, veracious, delicious
these earth sisters, these rebel mothers
they’re vexing, sexy and pernicious
Women who belonged to another time
where writing a letter was by
an exquisite hand
before flirting became extinct
and ladies still blushed behind their fans
Like a whim of Scarlet’s
they turned suddenly
as their conversation waned
shutting the door with the bolt of a latch
Leaving behind the longing to join them, but instead only an
abandoned handkerchief
to be picked up
to savor the perfumed shadows
of these women, these Southern women
©2006
Carole Mathys
Birgit and Roger
This is beautiful; very nice! BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
capture them this well. But of course they were used to posing.
Made an art of it! Tell you a secret: the Belle still lives.
I have Southern friends who have retained the best of the breed's traits and habits. They may wear jogging suits and running shoes, but
their hair is done and their nails are impeccable. . .yet they can
type 100 words a minute and cuss like. . .nevermind. They are
real, honest-to-god steel magnolias, I'm sayin'. Every one of them would love your poem! Gotta see if I can catch one & send 'er over.
Won't be easy, tell ya that. Thanks for the great read! Now go get yo parasol an' sally oan down t'the pahk. Hear there's a
'limmonade' stan'. {Or is it julep?} 'Pea' <3
"Northern men often dream too"
Well Penned
Love & Peace
William
Joyce
Well done Carole!!
Love Tinka
Your imagery is fantastic. I like these lines :
"their hankies were tucked in cleavages
where eternal trickles of perspiration ran
from the female breast bone to
exotic vacation spots
that Southern men often dream about"
Sometimes dreams do come true. Anyway, excellent write.
Love it!
Peace and blessings,
Carolyn
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. (a Southern girl by choice)
Eileen^