Storm's Fury (poem) by Carole Mathys on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on May 7, 2006

Beauty and knowledge mingle with art in "Storm's Fury", and a poetic excellence adounds.

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by alejapoet@aol.com Bennett

Reviewed on April 19, 2006

Wow! what a powerful ending and this is so deep, real and what we all go through in life. When we escape the storm then my friend we havew weathered it.

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on April 16, 2006

You have described the storm so well. Well-done, Carole!

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Nordette Adams

Reviewed on April 15, 2006

Wondeful imagery, Carole. :-) ~~Nordette

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green

Reviewed on April 11, 2006

E x c e l l e n t !! Images pull you along, and suddenly you are
i n the funnel. Scary, but very well done. T h a n k y o u!!
'Pea' <3

Reviewed by David Young

Reviewed on April 11, 2006

My favorite.
"a gigantic tree
all of its leaves thrown backwards
onset of a storm"

Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga

Reviewed on April 11, 2006

Dear Carole,

Superb imagery,

over a small town
the sky in savage colors
like painful bruises... this is intensly powerful!

absolutely remarkable Haikus.

warm hugs and love
Elga

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on April 11, 2006

A storm is a wonder, Carole; you pen it well. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on April 11, 2006

An outstanding write Carole
loaded with dark images of a deadly storm
as you place pen at what your soul views
Your haikus are excellent
thanks for sharing

Love & Peace
William

Reviewed by E. Richardson

Reviewed on April 10, 2006

exceptiona work! The form of this is perfect...real life moments as they are truly seen in such situations....sharp, vivid snapshots...

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on April 10, 2006

Stunningly breathless and "shocking", Carole, like a reporter in the midst of Armageddon. I especially "like" the last two stanzas: wonderfully visual and right between the eyes. TY Kate xx

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on April 9, 2006

You've captured the storm's fury quite powerfully, Carole - and it seems Mother Nature truly is on a rampage lately.

Reviewed by Joyce Hale

Reviewed on April 9, 2006

Carole, you have a way with words, whether soft as moonlight or tumultuous as the subject you written about above! You are gifted!

Peace. Joyce

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on April 8, 2006

passionately penned turbulance, Carole ... some very effective imagery ....

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on April 8, 2006

Carole,

This is haiku at its very best; splendid writing! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :)

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on April 8, 2006

Carole,

You paint the storm in all of its colors; powerful haiku bring it vividly to mind (especially the savage colors). Too many in the midwest and south living this nightmare...Excellent, excellent write.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Hope this finds y'all well.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on April 8, 2006

Par excellence!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on April 8, 2006

Carole, powerful, magnificent chain of storm Ku! You really got into the rhythm of the weather!Kudo's!

Love,
Eileen