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Storm Over The Desert
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~ Storm Over The Desert ~


 


A restless wind swept in


strumming the loose screen


at the open window


then just as suddenly seemed


to swirl down a drain


in the floor of the desert


Dirty clouds began scudding in


looking like scrub rags


that swabbed a filthy floor


Lightning with a dragon’s worth of teeth


flashed across black clouds


sharp and bright


Thunder crashed


the sky convulsed and shook off


a million silvery scales of rain


and then a milling more


An inverted tree of lightning


caught fire


it’s trunk in the heavens


and it’s branches shaking at the earth


a second tree overlaid the first


and a third overlaid the second


a brief lived bright forest


that burnt out even as it grew


Between the charred sky


and the ashen earth


the rain resembled shimmering


curtains of smoke


as the storm swallowed day


 


© 2006


Carole Mathys


 


 


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 Reviews of "Storm Over The Desert"
Reviewed by Joyce Hale
Reviewed on July 5, 2006
Stunning, Carole!

Peace.

Reviewed by Crystal Silver Angel (Reader)
Reviewed on June 18, 2006
(((( MASTERPIECE )))))

Peace & Love, Dove

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on June 9, 2006
Wonderfully sustained imagery throughout that was all at once surreal and yet very tangible. I could visualise every shudder and spark. An artist's acuteness of observation here and penned with the mind of a poet. Very well done. TY Kate xx

Reviewed on June 6, 2006
Loved the impression this leaves upon the mind

Reviewed by Amy Avatar (Reader)
Reviewed on June 4, 2006
Facinating picture. "Storm Over The Desert"
gave me the urge to watch it from my window
with a hot cup of cocoa.
I enjoyed this so much so.
Amy Ramdass

Reviewed by Nordette Adams
Reviewed on June 2, 2006
This is a word painting done well. :-) ~~Nordette

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on June 2, 2006
Beautifully written Carole
Enjoyed it with delight
Felt I had front seats
at a documentry.
Thanks for sharing

Love & Peace
William

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on June 2, 2006
A superb descriptive poetic rendition of a storm. I find this enthralling from start to finish. Thank you for sharing this offering, Carole. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed on June 2, 2006
Carole,

Stunning imagery brings the power of the storm vividly to mind. What refreshment after the scorching heat! Thank you, well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed on June 2, 2006
Vivid imagination and prose; very nice, Carole! Good stuff!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Gloria Buono
Reviewed on June 2, 2006
You have written excellent prose. So vivid I not only feel but hear the thunder. Thanks for sharing. My best, Gloria

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
Reviewed on June 2, 2006
Ahhhh, I can smell the smoke and rain! Wonderful capture, Carole.
Peace,
Carolyn

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on June 2, 2006
Splendid depiction that paints a storm in my mind's eye. Excellent imagery.

Reviewed by Paul Williams
Reviewed on June 2, 2006
Superb stormy exposition Carole, the vigorous imagery sears the mind. Excellent.

Paul;-)

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on June 1, 2006
Carole an exceptional poem with dynamic imagery that matches the most fierce storm. Exhilerating to read and experience! Kudo's!

Love,
eT


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