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Silence of Snow
by Carole Mathys → (All Poetry by Carole Mathys)
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~ Silence of Snow ~

 

The snow began to fall

huge flakes blanketing

limbs overhead

as the firs and pines

let go their long-held breath

in a fragrant sigh

 

The air was like cut crystal

the dawn sky so pale

it disappeared into itself

Drifting clouds huddled

as if the warmth of togetherness

would melt the snow

they carried in their bellies

 

Briefly the silence was broken

by the muffled thud

of the heaver sound of hail

striking deep in the packed pine needles

bouncing crazily

on the frozen ground

with stinging cold

The hail pocked the snow

making it dance

disappearing

into and becoming one

returning to the silence of snow

 

© December 2007
Carole Mathys


 


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 Reviews of "Silence of Snow"
Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on January 26, 2008
Beautiful images! You can almost heart the silence...
My favorite image in this poem is "Drifting clouds huddled as if the warmth of togetherness would melt the snow they carried in their bellies." What a great depiction of snow clouds.
Cryssa

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on January 21, 2008
So well-observed and finely reproduced in image and detail. A very striking view, some delicious scents and the beauty of... silence! TY Kate xx

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on January 20, 2008
a most heavenly capture, Carole ..

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on January 17, 2008
Snow thou silent beauty. Enveloping all you touch with an aura of pristine serenity. And upon melting, you will cleanse the very soul of me. Carole, your verbiage is inspiring. What a lovely piece of work. Jon Michael Willey

Reviewed by Rafika Anderson (Reader)
Reviewed on January 16, 2008
Carole, this was absolutely riveting. I loved the silence and the snow, but especially the pine trees, which I enjoy daily as they surround my dwelling. Wonderful writing and nicely packaged winter scene.

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on January 15, 2008
I just returned from holiday in Florida, and your poem just brought me back to reality..I need that sometimes..It is such a vivid depiction of what snow can say to you in the silence of a cold crisp day/evening..This snow tonight here in Connecticut was very beautiful and silent just as you have described in your poem..It really hit me, thank you for this gem...
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
Reviewed on January 14, 2008
love the silence of snow; you've got me remembering my frozen years in upstate New York! a lovely write, poetess.
wonderful to hear from you,
peace and blessings,
carolyn

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on January 2, 2008
Snow always evokes a magical "spirit" within me. Thank you for sharing this gift, Carole. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Emile Tubiana
Reviewed on December 30, 2007
Dear Carole, a very description well done, it makes you feel the snow. Happy New Year. Emile

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on December 24, 2007
A cold but wonderful imagery you painted!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Art Hernandez
Reviewed on December 24, 2007
This picture you paint from within the silence of snow and yet it radiates with boundless expressions of one who knows the sense created by snow...



very nice...



enjoyed, Art Sun...

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on December 23, 2007
Ah, Carole, you put me there . . . the sound of the hail what what did it . . . I shivered . . . Ya did good . . .

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on December 23, 2007
Thank You Carole
for this beautiful wintery write
I wrote one to this effect, the first day I arrived here
in the northeast, while I was walking in a fresh powdwery snow fall
but it wasn't as elegant nor as beautiful with imagery
as this wonderful Jewel.
Love & Peace be with you
wishing you and your family
Merry christmas & A Happy New Year.

William


Reviewed on December 23, 2007

Outstanding depicting of Nature's wonders... "Silence of Snow" flows.

In admiration,


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by R Beeman
Reviewed on December 23, 2007
there is solace and tranquility within our winter nature. well said and reflective in nature. snow is peaceful and contains mystical beauty.

always,
randy

Reviewed by F William Broome
Reviewed on December 23, 2007
So real..... So graphic..... So cold..... So well written, I'm freezing in a room of 72 degrees. Your imaging machine is in top condition. Enjoyed much, much! - Bill


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