~ Silence of Snow ~
The snow began to fall
huge flakes blanketing
limbs overhead
as the firs and pines
let go their long-held breath
in a fragrant sigh
The air was like cut crystal
the dawn sky so pale
it disappeared into itself
Drifting clouds huddled
as if the warmth of togetherness
would melt the snow
they carried in their bellies
Briefly the silence was broken
by the muffled thud
of the heaver sound of hail
striking deep in the packed pine needles
bouncing crazily
on the frozen ground
with stinging cold
The hail pocked the snow
making it dance
disappearing
into and becoming one
returning to the silence of snow
© December 2007
Carole Mathys
My favorite image in this poem is "Drifting clouds huddled as if the warmth of togetherness would melt the snow they carried in their bellies." What a great depiction of snow clouds.
Cryssa
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
wonderful to hear from you,
peace and blessings,
carolyn
Regis
Love Tinka
very nice...
enjoyed, Art Sun...
for this beautiful wintery write
I wrote one to this effect, the first day I arrived here
in the northeast, while I was walking in a fresh powdwery snow fall
but it wasn't as elegant nor as beautiful with imagery
as this wonderful Jewel.
Love & Peace be with you
wishing you and your family
Merry christmas & A Happy New Year.
William
Outstanding depicting of Nature's wonders... "Silence of Snow" flows.
In admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
always,
randy