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Autumn Serenade
by Carole Mathys → (All Poetry by Carole Mathys)
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~ Autumn Serenade ~

 

the fall sun was

still shrugging off sleep

as the last days of summer

had been pushed off stage

while long shadows

stretched toward winter

the ground was littered with

spent leaves of red and yellow

chestnuts in spiky coats

sat proudly on fingertips

of cold branches

a cool breeze brought with it

clusters of forgotten items

gum wrappers, dried leaves

brown and green duck’s feathers

they danced along

 the reaches of the street

resting then twirling

in step with each gust

a final shimmer

of autumn sun reached through  

a French window

hovering winsomely

landing, exhausted

in a series of pale squares

 

© Carole Mathys

October 2009

 

 


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 Reviews of "Autumn Serenade"
Reviewed by Stephen Pollard
Reviewed on November 3, 2009
Carol :

In Autumn Serenade you created the perfect poem about
the fall season, and the picture you inserted fits in
just perfectly.

Well done,

Stephen Pollard

Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on October 17, 2009
well said

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on October 12, 2009
Carole, this is the inspirational parlance of the light hearted, sharing the reflective moments of seasonal creep into the countryside -- splendid words that illuminate nature's stage of multi-hued pleasures -- and what a splendid photograph to fix the scene in our minds -- peace and love my dear friend, you excel again with your poetry -- Jon Michael

Reviewed by Johanna Fields (Reader)
Reviewed on October 9, 2009
Carole,Your poem took my breath away.Just charming!!!!! Blessing Johanna

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
Reviewed on October 6, 2009
Lovely as autumn at its peak. If not lovelier! xOx 'Pea' xOx

Reviewed on October 6, 2009
Your images are alive and your words lead through an Autumn wood.

Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow
Reviewed on October 6, 2009
As always your images are stunning.. always a pleaure to read you..)

Myrna

Reviewed by J'nia Fowler
Reviewed on October 6, 2009
A joy to read and to experience in your photo and my memory as well. J'nia

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Reviewed on October 5, 2009
Quite simply - beautiful!!! What a delightful read!

Anna

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
Reviewed on October 5, 2009
Some of your best word painting yet, carole!
lovely capture,
carolyn

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on October 4, 2009
you take us on a visual journey here, Carole, which is delightful and thoroughly engaging. I feel like I'm settling back comfortably to watch a heartwarming Hollywood epic unravel before my eyes... You Autumnwood feature has me gripped! I love the colourful and gaily-dancing drama unfolding here. xx

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on October 4, 2009
Sitting behind a French window looking at the falling autumn leaves...

Georg


Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on October 4, 2009
VERY BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on October 3, 2009
A most exquisite ode to autumnal beauty! Love it, Carole!

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on October 3, 2009
..a whirl wind of beauty Carole!

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on October 3, 2009
Great capture of your subject matter and opening of your readers eyes to the beauty of autumn...
hugs
fee

Reviewed on October 3, 2009
Gorgeous scenery and poem, Carole; I love fall.....

Well done; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on October 3, 2009
You have vividly shared the visual scene and thus awakened emotions within the soul of the reader (me), Carole. Very nicely done. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed on October 3, 2009
Exquisitely drawn in verse, one sees the vision in your head - beautiful, Carole.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Mark Lichterman
Reviewed on October 3, 2009
How beautiful, Carole. Finding the right words to draw the picture you want to convey causing me, the reader to see what you wish me to see or, what is more important, causing me to feel what you wish me to feel, this serenade of Autumn. Beautifully stated.
Mark

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on October 3, 2009
Carole,
This is inspired writing, the composition, choice of language and detail all right, so right; poignant and beautiful.

John

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on October 3, 2009
WHAT A PICTURE YOU'VE DRAWN! THIS 'PAINTING' FILLED WITH THE PHRASES AND IMAGERY OF FALL'S GOLDEN COLORS IS JUST BEAUTIFUL. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Reviewed on October 3, 2009
God, this is really beautiful writing. Well done!!


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