Dear Carole, i'm a fan of haiku and i think it is the best venue for your beautiful random thoughts. Wonderful sets of four seasons. Peace, love and blessings to you.
Wonderful, Carole...each one of these bear all of nature's treasures. More Random Thoughts bear well in the outside world where material wealth looks pretty poor compared to the simplicity of your haiku's...
Carole, your haikus may be random, but the message of each imparts the finishing touches to your magnificent photograph -- "chill wind moaning, as a pile of colorful leaves, scattered like wishes" -- a story repeated throughout our lives, beautiful dreams scattered and dispersed by the harsh winds, the bite of reality -- my favorite -- peace and love my dear friend -- Jon Michael
I didn't know what a Haiku was and read "More Random Thought" as a poem and, though I didn't understand the signafince in the sequence of the verses, when I finished and realized what you had written, each verse, or, I assume, each Haiku took on a beauty of its own.
Mark
Carole,
I like each and every one, the images are sharp and rich; if I had to choose one, it'd be the dark grey clouds "heavy with intention" - that one is highly vivid and evocative.
Fine work.
This book represents a thirty-day period of my poetry journal. Each poem addresses
the dominant thoughts occupying my mind during the early morning hours of a given
day.
Robin Ouzman Hislop's poetry is certainly in dialogue with some of the key architects of the 'poetics of indeterminacy' – both the Modernist strands represented by the likes of Beckett and Stein, and the postmodernist strands represented, initially,
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Sheri
Wonderful. Again you picked the picture that was just
right for the style you were writing in.
Stephen Pollard
nice....
Art Sun...
This one strikes home:
a winter type wind
lifts the cats fur
then moves on
-gene.
waking up with someone else’s
dream on your tongue
inhaling in anticipation
Skillfully done, and much appreciated your sharing with us!
Anna
always a pleasure to savor your artistry.
carolyn
telephone lines like a crow
autumn’s chill lingered
... this my favourite of this picturesque string, Carole; captures so much in so few syllables! :)) xx
Warmly,
Sage
Georg
outstanding kus each on its own
I miss that one season "Autumn"
And its beautiful kaleidoscope scenes....
Love & peace
William
Mark
I like each and every one, the images are sharp and rich; if I had to choose one, it'd be the dark grey clouds "heavy with intention" - that one is highly vivid and evocative.
Fine work.
John
Regis
hugs
fee
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D