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Izanami Remembers
by Paul Williams → (All Poetry by Paul Williams)
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This is another poem that's had a re-working, more structually than content...again, it comes from Tales from the Apocalypse...and contains strong imagery. Based on Japanese mythology Izanami("she who invites") is a creation Goddess who gave birth to the Fire God Kagutsuchi. Used here to convey the horror of apocalypse.


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Izanami Remembers

 

Izanami had seen it all before long ago,

a heroic sacrifice in a sacred war.

A little girl,

an innocent in a violent world.

 She remembered,

sitting in the school room

looking at the clock on the wall;

11:02 am

and the noisy silence that followed.

 she remembered

that day  August 9th 1945 well.

 She remembered,

 a scorching hot day; 3000, 4000 degrees

cicadas singing in the trees,

lotus blossom

floating on a listless breeze

then long ago.

 

But…even now

 

she hears the screams,

the sound of the dying, burning

in her dreams.

 She remembered

being too stunned to cry,

and feeling no pain in the ashen rain.

Sitting in the rubble

waiting for the sun to rise.

 She remembered

no pangs of hunger but a strange weakness,

sickness and diarrhoea;

A tiny purple body covered in lumps,

her hair coming away

in clumps,

and for many years she cried crimson tears,

then long ago.

 

 Izanami had seen it all before

she knew

he was back to settle a score.

She would not survive, not this time.

 

She was glad Kagutsuchi

 had come again,

 he looked more beautiful  than before.

Her last thought,

before he rooted out her eyes

 and she remembered

no more.

 

© P Williams 2003&2006

 

 



 
 

 

 
 


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 Reviews of "Izanami Remembers"
Reviewed on April 10, 2006
... AND THERE WILL BE THE CENTURY OF CREATION WHERE JUSTICE WILL BE THE WAY, AND HUMANKIND WILL HAVE TIME TO SHARE IN TOGETHERNESS AND CREATE TO SHARE.

"Izanami Remembers" made me think all through my psychobiological memory. This composition is a key to the mystery's hall and a Revelation tool.

I did appreciate the message in the closing lines:
"She was glad Kagutsuchi
had come again,
he looked more beautiful than before.
Her last thought,
before he rooted out her eyes
and she remembered
no more."

Gratefully,


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on March 25, 2006
Chillingly thought-provoking, Paul. Thank you. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Nordette Adams
Reviewed on February 8, 2006
Chill me to the bones, why don't you? This is quite a skilled write, Paul. I may grab my Teddy Bear this evening after reading this one. ~~Nordette

Reviewed by Aberjhani
Reviewed on February 6, 2006
What an extraordinary fusion of mythology, history, and metaphor to illustrate humanity's delusions toward war and destruction. That we so often insist on seeing beauty and nobility where in truth there is only horror is one of great ironies, I believe, of the human will to rule and conquer all with which it disagrees, or perceives as disagreeing with it. Truly brilliant lines from first to last.

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on February 5, 2006
Blimey (sorry, unfortunate expletive in this instance)... how powerful is this??!! I would imagine that this is very much how ANYONE might feel who is caught up in the nightmare of sudden horror in the midst of "normal" and everyday life. Like over here in a train derailment of terrorist blast. And the cultural difference adds to the "strange" qualities of this, Paul. Brings a chill to the bones in the light of the threat of chemical warfare that is never far from being one step away from reality... chilling, thank you (... if that's the right word...) Bless you, Kate xx

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
Reviewed on February 5, 2006
Unreal, in that it is all too real. How beautifully you express
the horror of it all. Every time I think about the tragedy (frankly, I try not to), I wonder again how those responsible managed to live with what they did. Mass murder and maiming! How do w e live with what was done? That survivors lived to overcome is one of the miracles of all time. A tribute to human strength and determination that, while it does not offset the horror, makes me think that we have a chance -- however miniscule -- of becoming humane. Thank you for writing and posting this. Phyllis <3

Reviewed on February 4, 2006
Heartwrenching but compelling, great work, and - as Ed said, you've got us all thinking now...
Birgit and Roger

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on February 3, 2006
Truly powerful, Paul - and an event in history that probably many don't think about very much. You have us all thinking now.

Reviewed by SilverCeltic Moon
Reviewed on February 3, 2006
What an intense and riviting write! Well Done! ;) Silver

Reviewed by Robin Labenberg
Reviewed on February 3, 2006
Stunning imagery with this...I am trying hard to understand why humans are capable of such vile and hateful things

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on February 2, 2006
Ouch! written with such style. Yet I have difficulty accepting that it was the right thing to do. Albeit above military bases.
Maybe it's the lingering memories of that, that has prevented a re-occurance... Top write Top man..

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
Reviewed on February 2, 2006
Yes, we must ALL remember! Powerfully expressed, dead-on message herein, Paul. Great, creative write; crucial subject matter.
Peace and Blessings,
Carolyn

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on February 2, 2006
Wow! You stunned me with this one Paul! So glad you reposted!
Beautifully written linking Hiroshima and Armageddon, really brings home the terror and horror of it all! Splendid write!

Eileen^

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on February 2, 2006
Absolutely brilliant.....the starkness of this poem
and the imagey is utterly overwhelming Chuckie!!

Love Tinka


Reviewed on February 2, 2006
What a masterful piece and intent of message. Will mankind ever learn what humanity really means? Poet Teacher, well done. Peace, love,blessings and hope that there is something left for our survival as a species.

Reviewed by L. Figgins
Reviewed on February 2, 2006
This is horribly beautiful in it's power, Paul. I've always hated the term, "casualties of war" which is so dismissive of the agony and horror which it inflicts on human beings. According to a pilot
who flew that fated and deadly mission, there were two suns in the sky that day. They symbolize to me the dawning of the possibility of total obliteration of humanity leading to a final sunset...Lin

Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga
Reviewed on February 2, 2006
Dearest Paul,

Well you have certainly evoked the harshness, reality and deplorable atrocities of war. May humanity learn not to act with inhumanity!!

Extremely powerful Paul.

Much love and warm hugs my friend
Elga

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on February 2, 2006
A stark portrayal of the horrors of a nuclear attack. This can happen again but on our shores with millions of victims. Pray that it doesn't.

Reviewed by Sara Russell
Reviewed on February 2, 2006
Brilliant... this combines visceral imagery of war with some exquisite dreamlike scenes at the beginning, before the start of the horror. Worth reading again several times.

Reviewed on February 2, 2006
Compelling storytelling makes this one to remember...I can't imagine what horrors the Japanese citizenry went through, but this must come close. Well done, Poet!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on February 2, 2006
Utterly compelling and devastaing depiction and adaption of the aftermath of the Hiroshima and Nagasaki Atomic Bombs !
Your revision accentuates the horror and carnage of Nuclear War and the radiation fall out in its wake, that incinerated those two Japanese cities and their stricken inhabitants to ashes !
The analogy with the Japanes Goddess Izanami is a striking and
spectacular comparison
You add a new and unique dimension to the Den with your inventive and original works and labours Paul !
Peter


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