Izanami Remembers
Izanami had seen it all before long ago,
a heroic sacrifice in a sacred war.
A little girl,
an innocent in a violent world.
She remembered,
sitting in the school room
looking at the clock on the wall;
11:02 am
and the noisy silence that followed.
she remembered
that day August 9th 1945 well.
She remembered,
a scorching hot day; 3000, 4000 degrees
cicadas singing in the trees,
lotus blossom
floating on a listless breeze
then long ago.
But…even now
she hears the screams,
the sound of the dying, burning
in her dreams.
She remembered
being too stunned to cry,
and feeling no pain in the ashen rain.
Sitting in the rubble
waiting for the sun to rise.
She remembered
no pangs of hunger but a strange weakness,
sickness and diarrhoea;
A tiny purple body covered in lumps,
her hair coming away
in clumps,
and for many years she cried crimson tears,
then long ago.
Izanami had seen it all before
she knew
he was back to settle a score.
She would not survive, not this time.
She was glad Kagutsuchi
had come again,
he looked more beautiful than before.
Her last thought,
before he rooted out her eyes
and she remembered
no more.
© P Williams 2003&2006
"Izanami Remembers" made me think all through my psychobiological memory. This composition is a key to the mystery's hall and a Revelation tool.
I did appreciate the message in the closing lines:
"She was glad Kagutsuchi
had come again,
he looked more beautiful than before.
Her last thought,
before he rooted out her eyes
and she remembered
no more."
Gratefully,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Regis
the horror of it all. Every time I think about the tragedy (frankly, I try not to), I wonder again how those responsible managed to live with what they did. Mass murder and maiming! How do w e live with what was done? That survivors lived to overcome is one of the miracles of all time. A tribute to human strength and determination that, while it does not offset the horror, makes me think that we have a chance -- however miniscule -- of becoming humane. Thank you for writing and posting this. Phyllis <3
Birgit and Roger
Maybe it's the lingering memories of that, that has prevented a re-occurance... Top write Top man..
Peace and Blessings,
Carolyn
Beautifully written linking Hiroshima and Armageddon, really brings home the terror and horror of it all! Splendid write!
Eileen^
and the imagey is utterly overwhelming Chuckie!!
Love Tinka
who flew that fated and deadly mission, there were two suns in the sky that day. They symbolize to me the dawning of the possibility of total obliteration of humanity leading to a final sunset...Lin
Well you have certainly evoked the harshness, reality and deplorable atrocities of war. May humanity learn not to act with inhumanity!!
Extremely powerful Paul.
Much love and warm hugs my friend
Elga
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Your revision accentuates the horror and carnage of Nuclear War and the radiation fall out in its wake, that incinerated those two Japanese cities and their stricken inhabitants to ashes !
The analogy with the Japanes Goddess Izanami is a striking and
spectacular comparison
You add a new and unique dimension to the Den with your inventive and original works and labours Paul !
Peter