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10...9...8...
by L. G. Figgins → (All Poetry by L. G. Figgins)
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In ten days
the world can change
turn upside down for good or bad
But you remain standing
tho dizzy from the spin


In ten days
your world can collapse
But the brain
has a self-balancing mechanism
catches on the core
of solid earth within
and your feet land safely


In ten days
you can start anew
take what's left
of the broken peices
transmute them into new dreams


In ten days
you can discard the extraneous
bits of sodden fluff
floating flotsum on the surface
swim in deep waters
and come up for fresh air...
alive!


 



(c) Linda Gayton 2006


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 Reviews of "10...9...8..."
Reviewed by K. Mulroney
Reviewed on February 10, 2007
All that in ten days? I didn't know I was so talented..lol!! But this truly shows you are!

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on April 28, 2006
I love the hope that is expressed via your verses here, Lin. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on April 28, 2006
In ten days discard the sodden fluff swimming in deep waters and come up for fresh air and new dreams shall appear. ;) Hopefully!
Excellent Lin!

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on April 27, 2006
a mist inspired and uplifting poem, Linda ...

Reviewed by Pierre Ortega
Reviewed on April 26, 2006
Sometimes life is so sad and complicated it is hard for us to go on. Yet we forget about how quickly things can change and most times for the better. The sorrows and pain of this life can be deep and hopeless, But its happiness and joys are as close as we can come to perfect and beautiful and they live on to conquer our sadness and revatalize our hope. Caught me coming up for air. Excellent Pierre.

Reviewed by Suzie Palmer
Reviewed on April 25, 2006
Dear Lin
10...9...8 is wonderful!
"...swim in deep waters
and come up for fresh air...
alive" Love it!!

"...In ten days
your world can collapse
But the brain
has a self-balancing mechanism
catches on the core
of solid earth within
and your feet land safely..."
Is similiar to my recent senryu
called "Misunderstanding".. Pls
read ... very uncanny!
Love, Suzie xox :-D


Reviewed by totally anonymous (Reader)
Reviewed on April 25, 2006
inspiring write well said!

Reviewed on April 25, 2006
Lin,

It is possible, with the right mindset and determination. A wonderfully inspired/inspiring write, very well penned!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Martin Hebert (Reader)
Reviewed on April 25, 2006
~~Linda~~i sure hope so~~wonderful poem~~

~~martin~~

Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on April 25, 2006
well done

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on April 25, 2006
A great write with expressive intent that insists the reader listen and think about what is being said. Time is so unimportant when compared to deeds.

Felix

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on April 25, 2006
10 days huh?

Though provoking piece!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on April 25, 2006
Linda
I'll trim it back to one day, Linda !
Bouncy and happy go lucky pen
Love and Light
Peter

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on April 25, 2006
brilliant..............
love your optimistic outlook
and i am counting!!!
pax :) A


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