Rain falls down
Like glitter
And I dance in it
Wishing I were pure and naked
I feel like a newborn
With primordial fluid washing over me
Flowing through me
And blessing me like stardust
Creating a high as good as any drug
I marvel at the colors
That cut through the raindrops
When I open my mouth and
Let them flow down my throat
Its like drinking purity
Within the folds of a rainbow.
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Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on February 3, 2005
Rain can be very refreshing, as is this poem. Thank you for dropping by my port and for your suggestions.
Excellent. Have you ever read my piece "I rained poetry"? Evokes the rain as a metaphor and there is a line "the thought of you, naked in the rain" that came to mind as I read this.
I am editing this to include a link to where you can find the piece online...it was part of my 2002 interview with "poetry Life and Times"
A way to use your mind for silent communication. Speaking about the methods in the book I have used since a young age.
21st Century learning. I also have a GoFundMe page to ask for funds so I can research with other people and add their experiences
The captivating music of birds and the enchanting beauty of roses have, each in their own right, inspired people around the world for as long as anyone can remember. How the two combine with the challenges faced by a struggling writer in Georgia to c
A way to use your mind for silent communication. Speaking about the methods in the book I have used since a young age.
21st Century learning. I also have a GoFundMe page to ask for funds so I can research with other people and add their experiences
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I am editing this to include a link to where you can find the piece online...it was part of my 2002 interview with "poetry Life and Times"
http://www.poetrylifeandtimes.com/devault.html