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Trigger
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I don't like summaries, but I thought I'd explain why its so short....it was a fleeting image and sometimes condensed works work better for those types of images....
I stare through the coffin Of your mind Your blank look frightens me Will you be gone soon? Will your finger frinally find its trigger? I hold out hope that You can find some sort of solace in this life But, I know that you're long past that.

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Reviews of "Trigger"

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on March 22, 2005

So few words that express such powerful emotion and meaning; so well done. Thank you, Carrie. Regis

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson

Reviewed on March 21, 2005

agree with felix here
dark yet oh so real
enjoyed the fleeting pain

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on March 16, 2005

As per the emptiness of feeling lost and when the hope starts to dwindle maybe the trigger finger justs gets a little itchy.

Felix

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)

Reviewed on March 16, 2005

Yes it is thought provoking because I have known people who have had their fingers on the trigger literally and in fact.

Reviewed by Dave Harm

Reviewed on March 16, 2005

Thought provoking... at one time or another, many think of that trigger... but a little faith often brings solace...

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