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The Body
by Carrie A Deveney → (All Poetry by Carrie A Deveney)
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A tulip’s soft whisper


And the shiver of a cool spring rain


You lay in a field


Collecting dew and raindrops


With your fingers, clawlike


Digging into the earth


Trying to root yourself


Your head is flowing with stardust


And your eyes, black


Are drops of crude oil


What have you done to become


This drowned creature


Pale and Blue


Hair like seaweed


While the rain


Dissolves your body.


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 Reviews of "The Body"
Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on April 14, 2005
Profound write!

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on April 12, 2005
an extreme sense of desolation and alienation in this powerful poem ...

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on April 9, 2005
Wow! The imagery serves to enhance the meaning of these verses so strongly that they will not be denied a reading and another... ...and another. Thank you for sharing this offering, Carrie. Love and peace to you. Regis

Reviewed by Sue Hess
Reviewed on April 8, 2005
this is very interesting, as brian said, the imagery for sure but the entire poem gives a haunting feeling

Reviewed by Brian Pellerino
Reviewed on April 8, 2005
Haunting imagery. I can actually smell the decay..

Chilling,

B


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