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Ophelia in the River
by Carrie A Deveney → (All Poetry by Carrie A Deveney)
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Leaves are falling


To cover the maiden


Whose feet quickly traverse


The wilderness


The catch in her hair


Flowing behind her like garland


In the cool wind


And, she's Ophelia as she


Splashes into the winter river


And floats downstream


Blue lips and purple rimmed eyes


She's a picture of icy beauty


As her dress drags her down to the bottom


Where she waits


A century later


To be thawed in a Spring


That never comes


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 Reviews of "Ophelia in the River"
Reviewed by E. Richardson
Reviewed on June 25, 2007
this piece is both classical in its flavor and flow. Outstanding work!

Reviewed by Ian Thorpe
Reviewed on October 24, 2005
Great.
Somebody mentioned the painting but for me it also called to mind a poem by one of the French Romantics (Baudelaire I think, but don't trust me on that)
I do like that moody nineteenth century stuff - its like a Leonard Cohen song, quite uplifting in that it has a hypnotic effect.
Ian

Reviewed by Mark Rockeymoore
Reviewed on October 11, 2005
what a sad, beautiful write. you got the feel of melancholy across very well, with the invocation of the tragic ophelia, and such beautiful natural descriptions.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on August 27, 2005
Most enchanting, Carrie. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and peace to you.

Regis

Reviewed on August 2, 2005
Absolutely outstanding, This is excellent.

Reindeer

Reviewed by Jane Rodway (Reader)
Reviewed on July 29, 2005
This brings about thoughts of Millais' painting. Lovely.

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on July 28, 2005
very vivid imagery and atmosphere in this poem ... in "Hamlet" Ophelia is found with here dress spread open, leaving her looking like a flower ... i like how you took this theme into another level ... it has a dream-like quality to it ... i'm just a little confused why she waits for "a century later" to be never thawed ... overall, i like the affect of this poem ...

Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen
Reviewed on July 25, 2005
A beautiful write, Carrie, haunting and timeless with wonderful word relationships, like quickly and splashes, and the leaves covering the maiden while the river does the same, by dragging her down, flowing and floats, garland and icy beauty.

A masterful poem that leaves the reader wondering ... why. The only hint is the name Ophelia, which is all, and nothing. Unless, the blue lips and purple-rimmed eyes have a deeper meaning than the winter cold...

Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on July 25, 2005
Mystical and poignant write that leaves the reader wondering the maidens true story is.

Felix


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