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The Breeze, By ,, Rich Patterson
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My grandson wrote this when he was 8 in 2005... He was quite excited by the reviews his other poem received and asked me to post another one.

  The breeze is so calm.

     Sometimes the breeze is light.

       As I watch, I can see leaves moving,

         When the breeze touches them.

           I can feel the cool breeze on my face.

              The feelings are peaceful.

     

          By,   Rich Patterson

 

 


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Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on March 10, 2008
Nice poem!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on March 9, 2008
very sweet

Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on March 9, 2008
...continue your poem Rich...for your name says such...rich...as your poetry... take wing of peace...for you already know its feeling.
very well written Rich...
John

Reviewed by Barbara Smith
Reviewed on March 8, 2008
Rich, you've displayed in your words some great images...I could feel the breeze blowing across my back. Thank you for posting such a great poem on AD. Keep those excellent imaginations going & you'll always catch every readers eye.

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on March 8, 2008
I agree with Jill, and the txts... Great to see...

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on March 8, 2008
Rich, i enjoyed this very much, I love your observation of the world...I could also feel the cool breeze calming me as I read it...thank you

and hugs to grandma for sharing :)

Reviewed on March 8, 2008
Beautiful write, Rich; and thanks for sharing his words here, MaryGrace! You are ever the proud grandma; good for you!

(((HUGS))) and much love (to you both!), your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle
Reviewed on March 8, 2008
Rich as a keen eye for nature, considering his young age, MaryGrace. For being just 8 years old, this is an amazing poem. The writing love bit me at age 8, too. I wrote short stories for 6 years and finally discovered poetry at age 14. I hope Rich continues to write and I hope his teachers and your family continue to support his efforts, since good writers are sorely needed among our youth.

It's nice to know that some children, today, can still form a thought beyond 15 abbreviations in a text message!

Nice poem, Rich; keep up the good work and thanks, MaryGrace for sharing it with us!

Jill

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on March 8, 2008
A true poet in the making
Great work Richie
Thank you MaryGrace (Proud GrandMother)
For sharing this outstanding piece with us at the Den
Love & peace be with you both

William

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on March 8, 2008
I love the breeze, as I do your poem!

Reviewed on March 8, 2008
MaryGrace,

A gentle zephyr flowing through these beautiful lines - much calmer than the winds we sometimes get here in Texas! Well done, Rich, and thanks for sharing, MG!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on March 8, 2008
Beautiful writing Rich,stay safe and well both of you...Hugssss


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