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Ocean Sound
by Charles B. Neff → (All Poetry by Charles B. Neff)
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When love's your companion, a walk can involve more than exercize; and the discoveries you can make cover much more than the landscape.

Ocean Sound

Morning's light stretches me

Past the shadows of drowsy homes.

Wedged views of water grow larger,

On a crabbed descent to the level shore.

My pace lengthens, finds its rhythm.

Mountains and salty tang enchant me

And I wish you by my side.

My pace falters, thinking how you

Would stroll more than stride,

Dawdle and wonder at tiny marvels,

While I wrapped muscles around ideas.

I stride again, rhythm restored,

And find you already here,

Celebrating with me our miracle:

Love's common cadence

Amid our singular styles

And our singular senses.

 

-Charlie Neff   

 


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 Reviews of "Ocean Sound"
Reviewed on June 23, 2008
Beautiful connected.ness between poet and Nature - Charles, this is sublime!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by David Thompson
Reviewed on February 29, 2008
This is the first of your pieces I have had the opportunity to read. I am very much impressed. It reminds me of my love of the ocean, and when my wife and I are on the beach together, how she pauses to examine all the small details while I am in a rush to see what lies ahead. There's no place quite like the ocean. It's amazing how something so powerful can offer such tranquility. Thanks for the reminder.

David

Reviewed by Rafika Anderson (Reader)
Reviewed on February 6, 2008
Wow! I am utterly enchanted by your rhythm and flow in this well-crafted piece. The imagery is potent and vivid, grabbing the reader's consciousness from the very first line. I could practically feel the ocean spray on my face as you developed each line of the poem. Nicely done.

Reviewed by Theresa Koch
Reviewed on January 9, 2008
Wonderful writing~`*

Reviewed by Sistah J (Reader)
Reviewed on May 1, 2007
The metaphors in this piece really painted a very beautiful picture for me. Thanks for sharing.

Reviewed by neerja gandhi (Reader)
Reviewed on January 28, 2007
ooooouugh....great charming,thrilling, again a real reality in poetic fashion.Makes me smile and makes a goooooood start. Kudos!!!
neerja.

Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on November 10, 2006
A powerful poem, good imagery....M

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on August 21, 2006
beautiful work...


Reviewed on June 19, 2006
VERY NICE GREAT WORD FLOW

Reviewed by Shoma Mittra
Reviewed on June 8, 2006
wonderful write

Reviewed by Chrissy McVay
Reviewed on December 17, 2005
Very lovely poem.

Reviewed by Cynth'ya Reed
Reviewed on December 5, 2005
Words are like waves here, slapping against the breakers of the heart. Lovely Charlie, thank you,

blessin's
cynth'ya lewis reed

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on December 5, 2005
At first I thought "she" was not with the narrator of the poem, but of course at the end, she was. Still . . . one could assume that even though "she" wasn't there . . . she really was. Whatever! Good poem.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on December 4, 2005
A good partner is hard to come by...happy you have found yours at least once...Ed


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