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Our Barnacles
by Charles B. Neff → (All Poetry by Charles B. Neff)
Sunday, June 18, 2017    Rated "G" by the Author.
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Writing about something else, I chanced to read about barnacles. Suddenly a different thought slipped my mooring and launched me on a different tack.

     

                 Our Barnacles

Accretions of joy and sadness
Of thoughts, events and people
Like their marine cousins
Poems find a convenient hull
Answering instinct, not invitation
Compared to dangerous parasites
Barnacles are easy to carry
If occasionally scraped away
Mostly they sit silently
Mere presence, not threat
Until we ask the world

To regard and judge them
In an early microscopic view
Barnacles were swans’ eggs
Not unlike our wish for
Poems that occur and cling

 

 

 

Charles B. Neff
June 18, 2017

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "Our Barnacles"
Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on June 18, 2017
I certainly hope that poems don't find this Hull and cling to me like barnacles! They would have to compete with the pimples!

But, as a metaphor, there are certain lines and phrases from poetry going back to my grade school days, that are still with me, though unfortunately, a bit clichéd.

Ron

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on June 18, 2017
Interesting thought within the lines of this poem, Charles.

Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on June 18, 2017
Who's that knocking at my door?
Who's that knocking at my door?
Who's that knocking at my door?
Said the fair young maiden

Well, it's only me from over the sea
Said Barnacle Bill the poet
I'm all lit up like a Christmas tree
Said Barnacle Bill the poet
I'll sail the sea until I croak
Drink my whiskey, swear, and smoke
But I can't swim a bloody stroke
Said Barnacle Bill the poet.

I had to see how it fit...

Reviewed by Michael Schafer
Reviewed on June 18, 2017
Ditto what Jane said.

Reviewed on June 18, 2017
Great analogy and oh, so true! 'Enjoyed!

Love ya!

Jane


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