A line of divine, the serene words of your poems are sublime, chime to which endows, sows philosophy... the truth is "We belong to the endless, deathless realm, from where we are expelled"... it looks just crazy, but the truth is bitter, but atlast becomes better, brighter ... where many will follow to ... the hallow path of holiness...
God Bless the readers,,,
your cordially,
N.K.OSHO
Reviewed by Nana Issa (Reader)
Reviewed on May 28, 2006
You rock, girl! You sound like a wonderful person! Great poem.
Sandra . . . what a lovely and delicate view of yourself. What I found most seductive though was the underlying theme, the friction you created, unwittingly, by juxtaposing the spiritual and physical. I believe Sandra that there is a soft deception that ensues when one embraces one's corporeal self with too much abandon. Afterall, we are all just treasures in clay vessels and will someday return to the dust. I feel the allusion in the poem drifts too much towards flirtation with self. However demonstrative in scope, I felt this piece was quite anticlimactic in depth. Nevertheless, I enjoyed it! Thankyou for a sweet moment! You write with a unique introspection! Richard
I like the no-nonsense, upfront and truthful self-knowledge here, Sandra, which speaks of a maturity which even many of us older folks do not yet possess. You portrait a well-rounded (in all senses of the word!!) personality who has the ability to cope, to mentally give fair assessment of and to physically handle the thin white line of love without even breaking sweat. A compelling and lucid write that shows great aplomb and coolness as well as the warmth of heart that you speak of and amply demonstrate. Go you!! :)) Bless you, Kate xx
" wonders if love is a tale made for children
A myth or manipulation for the dreamer
A granting of sweet dreams for the innocent
A drug that heightens senses, shatters reality and flung into the heavens for the hopeful"
You are a very strong independant Woman who has a very strong talent for writing how she feels in an independant way, a superb piece, well done...take care...Mark xx
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Respected Poetess,
A line of divine, the serene words of your poems are sublime, chime to which endows, sows philosophy... the truth is "We belong to the endless, deathless realm, from where we are expelled"... it looks just crazy, but the truth is bitter, but atlast becomes better, brighter ... where many will follow to ... the hallow path of holiness...
God Bless the readers,,,
your cordially,
N.K.OSHO
Nana.
And a great thinker and a poetress, who knows what she's all about.
That's who I see from the brilliant words of this great work. Well done!
Safi
I also know that you are my friend
love and peace
Regis
A myth or manipulation for the dreamer
A granting of sweet dreams for the innocent
A drug that heightens senses, shatters reality and flung into the heavens for the hopeful"
awesome! I often say love was the original sin
God Bless
Michelle
You are a woman first and foremost...:)
And you have a Heart of Gold !
Blessings
Peter
This one is EXCELLENT!!!!! I love it!!!!!
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
Your writing speaks of an inner strength that is tempered with a sense of tenderness that speaks of love and hope.
A well written piece .
Robin
I like who you are. :) You sound strong and full of life! :) An excellent write--I may have to tell you who I am! Stay tuned...
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)
(((HUGS))) and love, your friend in america, karen lynn in texas. :D