Dogs are mowing yards with their motorized teeth.
Spitting out yesterday’s blades. While
dancing girls sport yellow scarves,
floating in and out of the murky debris.
Coughing and smiling, sputtering
a joining, an invitation.
While I appreciate the offer
I smile and nod a no-thank-you-please.
Slowly, my feet rise from the earth. Unburdened,
I ascend to the trees. Skyward the branches;
leaves and bees, all pass from front
to back. Right through her, she and me.
Sensing others, my eyes adjust to see;
A celebrated ballerina, her pointed toes sail
passed me. A man with an alabaster face
is gesturing fervently. A cherub meets us at the
Crown, with greetings of peace for all who leave ground.
I’m not sure what this is, I don’t
mind. I’m free and real in this new
body...same spirit. I am extremely
strange to most it seems.
Though, the uncomprehending
aren’t part of this most recent scheme.
(My sweet cherubs are LT-naked-AO with me)
~~GDL~~
Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on July 8, 2004
A very descriptive piece of poetry, and brilliant seamless imagery, makes this an outstanding write, Poet!!!… Excellently well-crafted, J.C.!!!… I enjoyed the read very much!!!… Thank you for sharing it.
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hi Janet! this one has such a floating, *dreamy* quality that just carried me away. Loved these lines: <leaves and bees, all pass from front / to back. Right through her, she and me.> Dawn
Major League ballplayer Justin Moore is kidnapped from his own ballpark and transported to a foreign land. It might take high-level international negotiations to free him. Or maybe he will take matters into his own hands.
Deputy Dave Jenkins investigates the murder of local high school principal, Jerry Egge, but this is a multi-faceted novel that deals with spiritualism, romance, friendship, and children who fall through the cracks.
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(My sweet cherubs are LT-naked-AO with me)
~~GDL~~
always electrifying and thought provoking. Superb work!
Bob H
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Love Tinka
This is really good Jan and I'm glad to see you writing again.
loveya.
A wistful and fanciful illusionary dream....Life is but a Dream eh ?
Peter Paton
love the abstract and feeling in this one awesome piece...
misse you here.
LP
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This one is sooooo well-written. The imagery is what I can relate to. I like the spirit in this one. This is one of your best!
Sandie May Angel :o)