Neitzche was right about absolute power, and this is why there will always be the politicians on both side of the fence living on high and talking about things they will never truly understand in their bubble of self-absorbtion. Strong poem.
I took this on face value, not metaphorically. I think sometimes people tend to internalize when it is not nessary. I get reviews with a message totally different from what I meant to be seen in the work. But the image of a fake plant in the corner, made by starving children in some far away place that we never think about, does make me angry. To her/him it is just another decoration to show off at the dinner party, but in reality it is sweat, and toil, from a neverending crappy life.
Metaphorically or otherwise this is great writing.
Very intense look at someone, perhpaps a lover or a friend, and what you see seems to disagree with you and your own sense of priorities and love. Very emotive and strong messages between the lines.
Who Are These People Anyway(s),i.e. They Are Everywhere Including A D!
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TRASK
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on August 15, 2009
Kicking ass and taking names is my subtle and timid take on this fiery, Jalapeno-hot blast from the gut. Plastic people in their plastic world living for how they perceive they look to the world, cause, like aren't I just the coolest and do you know where I went last Thursday night and who's arm I was holding kinda b.s. that is making America a third-world country. Nero is fiddlin'
Reviewed by RWE SAYS BYE (Reader)
Reviewed on August 15, 2009
Strong and incisive, trenchant and truculent in its own inimitable way. Definitely worthy of a few re-reads! Nicely done, Janet.
Reviewed by ~ H (Reader)
Reviewed on August 15, 2009
What a blast of words...wow. A powerful write Janet.
Your choice of words descriptive, angry and so they should be.
Yes, there is so much wrong with this picture and regrettably far too many who do not care.
NOT A PRETTY PICTURE...ALL WE CAN DO IS TRY TO MAKE A DIFFERENCE IN WHICH EVERY WAY WE CAN WHILE TRUSTING IN GOD. THANKS FOR SHARING AND GOD BLESS YOU. JOYCE* HIS INSPIRATIONS
Inspirational poetry, written from the heart and soul. Verses that are well-suited for reading on a rainy day and that are guaranteed to bring a smile to your face.
I have long enjoyed your poetry
Regis
Metaphorically or otherwise this is great writing.
Walt
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Be always safe,
Karen
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TRASK
Your choice of words descriptive, angry and so they should be.
Yes, there is so much wrong with this picture and regrettably far too many who do not care.
Blessings & peace, Holly