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What Lies in Sight
by Janet P Caldwell → (All Poetry by Janet P Caldwell)
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Capitalism/Rage

Arrogantly you stand in the corner

of an obliquely lit dining room.

Never needing sunshine for your

emerald radicals bereft of chloroplasts.

Your plastic roots won’t touch earth

or drink from the water’s edge.

Not a phenomenon from God

or Mother Earth. Yet

you seem alive, much like

the hottest mannequins

attending any dinner party.

An orbiculate adorned

in jade, a twiggy arm juts

slightly right, out of place.

So easy to rearrange.

We’re both beautiful

but I’m alive, breathing, animated.

Your artificial trunk sits in

a vessel of twisted bamboo.

You and your urn, imported

created by the calloused fingers

of children. From an island

which i can’t pronounce.

You reek of slavery, without essence.

A decorative graveyard of souls

I gaze at you, your hideous

superficiality and I can hear.

Unspoken secrets, notice the tears of

children with hardened hands.

Mass producing a reality in

sweltering assemblies, another

fruitless icon of malnutrition.

Does it not make you care?

Who are these people anyway?

The ones dining in polite veneer and

those working for a cup of rice,

both starving.

What is wrong with this picture?

Does it define who I am or you?


©Janet Caldwell 2001- 2009

 


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 Reviews of "What Lies in Sight"
Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on March 15, 2021

I have long enjoyed your poetry

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on August 20, 2009
This hits hard and to the core, Janet. Very powerful and meaningful expression. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed on August 20, 2009
Plastic always melts, eventually. A thought provoking and compelling pen.

Reviewed by Michelle Mead
Reviewed on August 18, 2009
Neitzche was right about absolute power, and this is why there will always be the politicians on both side of the fence living on high and talking about things they will never truly understand in their bubble of self-absorbtion. Strong poem.

Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Reviewed on August 17, 2009
I took this on face value, not metaphorically. I think sometimes people tend to internalize when it is not nessary. I get reviews with a message totally different from what I meant to be seen in the work. But the image of a fake plant in the corner, made by starving children in some far away place that we never think about, does make me angry. To her/him it is just another decoration to show off at the dinner party, but in reality it is sweat, and toil, from a neverending crappy life.
Metaphorically or otherwise this is great writing.

Walt



Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on August 16, 2009
Very intense look at someone, perhpaps a lover or a friend, and what you see seems to disagree with you and your own sense of priorities and love. Very emotive and strong messages between the lines.

fee

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on August 15, 2009
Plastic people living in ivory towers never having a clue, excellent write...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on August 15, 2009
Who Are These People Anyway(s),i.e. They Are Everywhere Including A D!

Unique Write On...

TRASK

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on August 15, 2009
Kicking ass and taking names is my subtle and timid take on this fiery, Jalapeno-hot blast from the gut. Plastic people in their plastic world living for how they perceive they look to the world, cause, like aren't I just the coolest and do you know where I went last Thursday night and who's arm I was holding kinda b.s. that is making America a third-world country. Nero is fiddlin'

Reviewed by RWE SAYS BYE (Reader)
Reviewed on August 15, 2009
Strong and incisive, trenchant and truculent in its own inimitable way. Definitely worthy of a few re-reads! Nicely done, Janet.

Reviewed by ~ H (Reader)
Reviewed on August 15, 2009
What a blast of words...wow. A powerful write Janet.
Your choice of words descriptive, angry and so they should be.
Yes, there is so much wrong with this picture and regrettably far too many who do not care.

Blessings & peace, Holly

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on August 15, 2009
NOT A PRETTY PICTURE...ALL WE CAN DO IS TRY TO MAKE A DIFFERENCE IN WHICH EVERY WAY WE CAN WHILE TRUSTING IN GOD. THANKS FOR SHARING AND GOD BLESS YOU. JOYCE* HIS INSPIRATIONS


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