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70's Sputter
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Young love and some mistakes...


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70's Sputter

 

She was a little bitty thing

blonde locks, and green eyes,

a sense of humour that made

a grumpy man sputter and sing.

 

Skinny limbs took her up a tree.

Spying the cars, throwing acorns

as they went by.

Hiding behind a limb covered with leaves,

heart racing as the tires screeched.

 

She was a rangy teen, with red spots,

long hair and that impish look.

Dancing through the woods,

swinging on the vines, pausing

to cradle a bull frog to hear him croak.

 

She was a lovely young woman, clear

skin and nubile. Entering the world of romance.

Never afraid to take a chance. Crawled behind

and held on tight. His engine flying hard, she felt free.

 

She was his woman, he was her man.

They smoked a bit of dope, until

the swelling of her breasts. He got a

job at Pepsi, loaded, and loaded some trucks.

 

She fussed and worried, remembering

his past. Internal confusion with some

disconnect, how could this last?

 

He went to school and studied, she worked

at the Optical shop. Out of left field,

she took off. Baby on her hip and

200 miles.

 

She is a little bitty thing

blonde locks, and green eyes,

a sense of humour that made

this grumpy new man sputter and sing.

 

Janet Caldwell 2010

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "70's Sputter"
Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on April 27, 2010
A slice of life and true to fact...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by TONY NERONE
Reviewed on April 27, 2010
A piece so well crafted. As always it is a pleasure to read you.

GOD BLESS YOU
Tony

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on April 27, 2010
A tale very well told, Janet. So nicely shared. Thank you. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on April 27, 2010
So many stories similiar to this one came out of that era...to quote an oft quoted line..."...it was the best of times it was the worst of times."

fee

Reviewed by C. J. Stevens
Reviewed on April 27, 2010
A wonderfully fine poem that tells a story. And tells it so entrancingly!
CJ


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