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Daze
by Janet P Caldwell → (All Poetry by Janet P Caldwell)
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It just is...

I woke up this day, feeling

a bit perturbed. My hands were

shaking, and skin was crawling,

premonitions so disturbed.

 

I tried to shake it off, but a screaming

silence remains in my blood. The kind

that forms in your throat, rings in

your ears,and will not quieten.

 

Wings are meant for angels,

rungs too slippery are dangerous.

Icarus longed for something more.

Careful love, you may get scorched.

 

I sat here long suffering

never telling the score.

Snapping my fingers

won't make it happen,

This really blows.

 

I went to sleep this night, feeling

a bit rattled. My hands were

patchy red, the skin was gone

and I am at a loss for words.

 

Janet Caldwell May 09, 2010

 

 


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 Reviews of "Daze"
Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot
Reviewed on June 6, 2010
I can relate, and of late, somethings rattling around to this effect...hope it's nothing..
Smiles and hugzz
Ch'erie

Reviewed by Nordette Adams
Reviewed on May 20, 2010
This is one poem that I hope is not based on actual life experience. But the writing's good.

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on May 10, 2010
...Imagination Is More Important Than Knowledge...

I Quote As You Should (Bad Dreams Otherwise) Say Same:

I Wish Nothing On You That You Did Not Wish On Me...

Watch Your Ass Whence You Least Expect It You're Gonna Get It Right Where (You Wish) It Hurts...

Keep Em Comen...

TRASK

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on May 10, 2010
excellent poem Janny
with love
Ron

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on May 10, 2010
Sounds like you may have some premoniton but all too often we read them wrong so don't hit the panic button just yet. Great write and like the way it came full cycle from first line to last.
fee

Reviewed by C. J. Stevens
Reviewed on May 10, 2010
Yes indeed! You truly paint a picture of a remembered general discomfort. I have been there, felt that. A fine poem!
CJ

Reviewed by Janet Caldwell
Reviewed on May 10, 2010
Thank you friends, I thought that I'd better jump in and let you know that all is well. The poem is pure imagination, I'm OK. xxx

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on May 10, 2010
Imagination grips the page in this write. I hope all is well.

Reviewed by Paul Judges
Reviewed on May 10, 2010
Super work, Janet....get it checked out !

Reviewed by TONY NERONE
Reviewed on May 9, 2010
It really could be anything, low blood sugar perhaps. If I lived there I would take you to a doctor. Go see one, please Janet.


GOD BLESS YOU
TONY

Reviewed on May 9, 2010
Hi Janet:

When your hand changes color, that means blood is not flowing through as it should, you might want to take a nuclear stress test to determine if there is any blockage somewhere. My hubby got that a lot before his surgery.

Also, look for pinched nerves. That can happen like this too. I hope you do feel better.

Hugs,

Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Elisabeth Barstowe
Reviewed on May 9, 2010
Powerful feelings awoken from these verses. Well done.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on May 9, 2010
I know I have felt this way and not so long ago; I can relate, Janet. Your verses elicit much. Thank you. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on May 9, 2010
IN INSTANCES LIKE THESE, ALL WE HAVE TO CLING TO IS GOD...BUT THEN...GOD IS ALL WE NEED. GOD BLESS AND THANKS FOR SHARING THIS WORK WITH VIVID IMAGERY. LOVE, JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS


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