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Dinner for Two Dimensions
by Janet P Caldwell → (All Poetry by Janet P Caldwell)
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Based on a dream


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All dressed in your finery. Finger bowls
and children scrubbed in polite veneer.
A shining silver bell on the table.
Ring, ding, apron bibbed maidens
with hair wrapped tight
appear.

Me at my own table, (yours?) dressed in jeans and a tee.
Cats meowing and no-one to bring the next dish.
Bowls all on the table, grab
what you like, a smörgåsbord

Chatter and scraping forks didn't bother
you. Your element and time, me in mine, how
did they cross?. I wondered why you didn't see me, I
certainly saw you in your 20th century attire.

I watched in stunned silence as you dabbed
the corners of your mouth with your fine
linen cloth in my dining room.
Me with a paper towel.

I hope you'll be back, maybe we
can chat about when you left this life.

Janet Caldwell
August 7th, 2010
Photo Slifer House Sitting Room

 


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 Reviews of "Dinner for Two Dimensions"
Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on August 11, 2010
ghostly atmosphere, vivid imagery ...

Reviewed on August 9, 2010
Such an interesting pen. Ghosts of banquets past!

Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Reviewed on August 9, 2010
A veritable cornicopia of images.

~W~

Reviewed on August 8, 2010
Powerfully penned, Janet, you leave me breathless ... well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on August 7, 2010
Unique n Different Style Romantic!

How Money$ Affect$ Reality Inclined...

TRASK

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on August 7, 2010
Love the ying and yang of this one and the sense of msysterious romance in the air...
fee

Reviewed by C. J. Stevens
Reviewed on August 7, 2010
This poem has a certain magic - it stays with one.
CJ

Reviewed by Miller Caldwell
Reviewed on August 7, 2010
What a lovely dream. I wish mine were better. But if you listen very carefully, you will hear me blow my Italian 1916 Bugle to announce the meal is ready!
Miller
www.millercaldwell.org

Reviewed by Susan Bergeron
Reviewed on August 7, 2010
a beautiful word picture...hope you meet her
Susan M Bergeron

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Reviewed on August 7, 2010
Stunning poetry, a feast for any multi-dimensional occasion.


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