Solar Slake (poem) by Janet P Caldwell on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on September 15, 2006

This is quality!I enjoyed it.

Cheers
Roshan

Reviewed by Susan Sparks (Reader)

Reviewed on November 15, 2003

Janet: I can "feel" your write here. The vivid images you conjure up in my mind. Sounds like your shrink gave you some good drugs for a change. Most only give bad advice.

Reviewed by Jeff Mason

Reviewed on November 9, 2003

You say a tremendous amount in this small space. Very
nicely picturesque. Beautiful imagery, and some profound thoughts.

Reviewed by Cindy Burch (Reader)

Reviewed on October 11, 2003

Stunning read, a quality poem.

Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington (Reader)

Reviewed on October 11, 2003

A most thought provoking piece with a touch of elegance. Well done!

~Jackie~

Reviewed by Dan Zuewski (Reader)

Reviewed on October 10, 2003

This srikes me as fun to read... lots of interesting syllables to twist one's tongue around. And I wonder... if you listened closely, could you hear the trees sighing experiencing the after-sap? You can almost hear them while reading this. ;)

Reviewed by Sara Russell

Reviewed on October 10, 2003

A very vivid, interesting write here, Janet... trees do have their own sensuality, you may have even used them here as an analogy for something more humanly-sensual; one can only speculate on that. Whatever the hidden picture within the picture, this poem has a rich, earthy quality, and was very enjoyable to read.

All the best,

Sara.

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on October 10, 2003

(((janet)))

a visual treat for the eyes, and a feast for the mind, this beautiful write *applause*

you make ME proud to call texas home (even though i'm a yankee--even worse, a damn yankee--HEY! i got here as fast as i could! LOL)--congratulations again on your winning AD # 3

(((((HUGS))))) and love,

karla. :)

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on October 10, 2003

wonderful write, janet; texas is truly smiling on your victory! well done! :D (((HUGS))) and much love, your fellow texas friend in BURLESON, karen lynn.

Reviewed by Woman Words (Reader)

Reviewed on October 10, 2003

Hey lady! You make me proud to be a Texan :-) This one reaches deep like all that you do. Congratulations to a very deserving winner

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on October 10, 2003

Looks I got here late, hopefully not last. Great writing.

Reviewed by Charles Mann (Reader)

Reviewed on October 10, 2003

THIS WAS GREAT MY DEAR FRIEND,,SO GOOD TO BE ABLE TO READING MORE THESE DAYS,I HAVE MISSED YOUR WONDERFUL WORDS,CHARLIE

Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang

Reviewed on October 9, 2003

Wow! Awesome Poem! Congrats on winning! Excellent poem!

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on October 9, 2003

This is excellent..profound and insightful.
~Chrissie

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on October 9, 2003

Congratz on winning Janet!!

Profound write Girl!!

love Tinka

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on October 9, 2003

Profound write!

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on October 9, 2003

A belated Congrats on winning Janet...good write here...floria

Reviewed by Transcendental Poet (Reader)

Reviewed on October 9, 2003

Amazingly deep and that message of floral struggle is loud and clear..
Wonderful visions..Another winner!

Justin

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers

Reviewed on October 9, 2003

It's hard for the human mind to capture the reality of nature. Although I believe you have managed to do just that. Another great write Janet. Lisa

ps: Congrats on winning the poetry contest!

Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster

Reviewed on October 9, 2003

Janet, my sweet friend...congrats on winning the poetry contest...you deserve it. This poem is wonderful. I enjoyed it. Hugs, Trish.

Reviewed by Alexander Shaumyan (Reader)

Reviewed on October 9, 2003

Great imagery. Trees are living organisms as well. Excellent!

Reviewed by m j hollingshead

Reviewed on October 9, 2003

i like this

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on October 9, 2003

enjoyed the marvelous imagery in this poem...

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot

Reviewed on October 9, 2003

An insightful write, nature is truly amazing. Shame that we bugga it up with our interference.
TY Janet
Also Congrats...
Ch'erie

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on October 8, 2003

Goodness slakes, I love this..
Awesome new Bio pic Janet...
x0x0x0xxo

Reviewed by Lloydene Hill

Reviewed on October 8, 2003

Bravo! Another wonderful creation! luv ya sweetie.
xoxoxo
Lloydene

Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)

Reviewed on October 8, 2003

You just know how to make my blood cold--the emerald part--chill...woooo, brrr JANET! Love it!!! I liked this line "if the ultraviolet is underprovided." Something about it...can't figure it out...just love it! When you write a poem...you just sink your claws in it and mangle senses!

Thanks,
Teresa Emilie

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on October 8, 2003

I remember thinking this is one of your best! Love it!Superb title too!

Reviewed by Zenith Elliott

Reviewed on October 8, 2003

Interesting question that I will have to think about...nicely done! ~Z~

Reviewed by Jim Dunlap

Reviewed on October 8, 2003

I suppose any two forms of life which are so radically different WOULD be poles apart. Interesting way of reaching the nonconclusion, question anyway.

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on October 8, 2003

No,We Are Eons Apart Separated From Reality!

TRASK