Looking for that peace within and longing with the depth of my soul to find it....
I feel and then fall Stand up once more Another two inches tall Reality is stripped bare The truth is a lie A tear has cleansed my eye My will holds my soul I can walk maybe run along Growing in twinge That makes me strong I am no longer clinging To life by its tail I'm going to have to Take it by its horns For I'm looking for tranquility In the eye of a storm
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Reviews of "From The Ram"
Reviewed by Mustafa Chughtai (Reader)
Reviewed on April 19, 2003
Shezray...its just too good ...too good !! no exaggeration, im just surprised at how u manage to say so much in just a few lines......buhat aalaa !!! lov ya !! Mus.
Reviewed by GHUFFRAN AMAN ULLAH
Reviewed on April 19, 2003
hmm.....cant put it better than farrah....makes two of us then.
Reviewed by Urbaz Dar (Reader)
Reviewed on April 17, 2003
I think I already told you how much i like this but it really is something special! Well done!
Reviewed by James David Compton (Reader)
Reviewed on April 15, 2003
Yes!
That which does not kill us makes us stronger. Keep up the good fight, Shezray.
-James
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on April 15, 2003
Beautiful verse and lovely picture.
Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on April 15, 2003
Your poetry is evolving. I think this is very good. ~Joseph
Shezray, very good poem. Hope you find what your looking for. Some search forever and I believe it is because they give up too easily that they never find it.
If you tend to believe romantic, passionate, masculine poetry is a thing of past eras, read "She Intrigues Me," and be swept away in the beautiful craft of a contemporary poet of love.
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That which does not kill us makes us stronger. Keep up the good fight, Shezray.
-James
For I'm looking for tranquility
In the eye of a stormzray,
This is beautiful,"
Peggy
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This is sooooo good. A poem with strength!
Sandie Angel :o)