Sage Sweetwater bringing you the Upper Tier in Creative Expression
sluice gates released the literary waters at a gradual rate, to enrich, not erode the poetic fields,
from above, the One watched from the multi-story Watchtower, furnished warning against invaders of Writers' Guilds,
literary organizations built according to cosmic specifications, Walls complete, authors prepared the altar to the gods,
tree-lined syntax boulevards welcomed all - goddesses, monks, and adventurers, the ideal configuration, circular, diversity of sods,
gongs and drums banged and beat, celebration of the toil of authors' ammenities, heroic sewer systems to keep the vile waste off the street,
but the fabled City of Poetry fell, victim to poor management and internal chaos, little remained but dens gorged with silt,
The Day the Authors Back-Stabbed Poetry in the Back...
surging floodwaters gave it the consistency of oatmeal, all that had been built, inundated with deception and the litany of evil deeds,
the City of Poetry founded and erected to provide word transportation, adjusted gradient and inspired many learned tomes, poets homes,
put simply, one averts the Bridge Over Troubled Water by raising the dikes or lowering the water, the gods champion this cause,
too precious to lose, at the heart of public works, poetic engineers have great influence, in ancient mythology, they are first to conquer the flood,
applause, the poetic engineer, head of Fords, Ferries, and Bridges outranks mudjackers, the poetic engineer puts up a cofferdam of bamboo,
clears the City of Poetry of silt and debris, credited in legend for supervising the blueprint of poetic design,
Breaking Bread and wine, incense is burned before his statue, hailed and veiled in vine, today free of avarice and all manner of corruption,
linking all authors to one another, one of the great poetic engineering feats of all time, holding the spine of the book with collective glue...we thank you...
The Day the Authors Back-Stabbed Poetry in the Back...
The Lavender Outlaw is in the House! The Firebrand Rocks! Sage Sweetwater's Authors Den poetry being transcribed to song by Iceland Songwriter Finnur Bjarki Sage Sweetwater Lesbian Songwriter Inducted into Porterhouse Music http://porterhouse.aiminghigh.is/??
Brilliant Sage!
I would love to live in the City of Poetry if you were its Mayor!
Thank you for this captivating piece...'linking all authors to one another...' Oh, to the glue that binds....!!!
Love you too Bella!
Suzie
I can only echo what the others before me have expressed, Sage; and add my deep appreciation for what you have expressed via your verses here. Thank you. Love and best wishes,
The levels on which readers can appreciate THE DAY THE AUTHORS BACK-STABBED POETRY IN THE BACK are numerous and all of them highly significant. We could describe this as a "rant" but coming from the pen of an accomplished literary artist it might be more appropriate to call it a poetic editorial on literary integrity. Subjects addressed include both the consequences of failing to observe such integrity and the rewards of doing so.
As a work of art in its own right, this poem forms a richly-jeweled mosaic of metaphor, allusion, and philosophical depth that endows it with a rare intensity of beauty as well as power. Much gratitude for the sharing.
Dear Sage -i've read this over and over - i think Art in my head singing is confusing me a bit on that stanza, but this is a great read on The City of Poetry, and the engineer - one to come back to, interesting - Nicky xx
Great Tribute to the Lead Poet, Sage! :)) May his front and back covers always stay hinged and bound, and his pages never grow flaky! As for the rest of us, orphan leaves will gather and accumulate mind-blowing sense once our collective positives are harnessed. Keep being our Scribe. Love, Kate xx
and i thank you for such a brilliant poem ... the collective glue is still in the process of being developed and the poetic spine is sturdy but still requires an occasional adjustment ...
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on July 10, 2007
What we have heah is the failure to communicate . . . Sorry Cool Hand, but I could not resist . . . Gotta love it . . . I think this vinegar vs honey write of yours is simply . . . Sage . . . You, dear Sage, are one of a kind and yes indeed . . . Gotta love it . . .
Brilliant write Sage, if anyone can cause ignorant people to get their heads out of the sand it's you!Thanks for your good wishes, please take care of you!
Thank you Sage for this profound piece as we study our own relationship to the writing of poetry and beyond. This leaves the reader with something to think about deep in his/her soul. Thank you for sharing.
May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always,and at your side constantly. With much love inmy heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), sister Barbie
a write as wakeless sleep, efficacious in its inherent heart-cry; incorporating frustration, cynicism, admiration, and hopefulness as the impetus for longed for change.
Richard
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Democratic Dilemmas and Divine Inspiration examines the significance or relevance of the idea that the U.S. Constitution was, as many believe, divinely inspired. How much did that belief matter to founders of the nation and how much does it matter no
I would love to live in the City of Poetry if you were its Mayor!
Thank you for this captivating piece...'linking all authors to one another...' Oh, to the glue that binds....!!!
Love you too Bella!
Suzie
Chrissy
Regis (Reg)
As a work of art in its own right, this poem forms a richly-jeweled mosaic of metaphor, allusion, and philosophical depth that endows it with a rare intensity of beauty as well as power. Much gratitude for the sharing.
Aberjhani
Elizabeth
Deeply moving, thought provoking, powerfully emotive, a brilliant write.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
peace and blessings,
carolyn
Love,
Eileen
May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always,and at your side constantly. With much love inmy heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), sister Barbie
a "BRAVA" of your work! I learn a little
more about you with each report.
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Becca
Richard
George
PS: When will installment two be ready to read/review? :>)