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Four Months and Four Days
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as the blackness fades


and


the blue skies


peek through the


clouds that ridiculed


me and


followed me all


the way to


the pacific,


my body regains


color and the feeling


returns to my


fingertips.


all i am now is a


scrambled, matted ball


of


cheap red


cheap yarn


that i'll try to untangle


as quickly as possible


so we can get on with


the show.


but cheap yarn is a


bitch to work with.
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 Reviews of "Four Months and Four Days"
Reviewed by Josie Lilly (Reader)
Reviewed on April 23, 2005
Interesting poem. I like the reference to the yarn. Well done writing.
Reviewed by Henry Stevens
Reviewed on April 18, 2005
I like the poem, the form, and what I take as the meaning. (Which may be all incorrent.) Good work. Henry
Reviewed by Sue Hess
Reviewed on April 18, 2005
i loved this. nothing cheap about you
Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on April 18, 2005
Yes but cheap yarn in the hands of someone who is a skilled and loving craftsman can be turned into a master tapestry. Great write Mia and great imagery.

Felix
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