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Inconsolable (haiku)
by Georg E Mateos → (All Poetry by Georg E Mateos)
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Memorial Day is gone, the flag moved now and then by the breeze and the sound of pipes were calling for silence.
Proud and sad were the people in front of a fresh dug earth just in time for a Memorial Day, yet, the question lingers...


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When hope vanishes...
the world becomes more empty
than a lonesome walk.







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 Reviews of "Inconsolable (haiku)"
Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Reviewed on June 7, 2007
Sad, sad, sad..
now they are saying what we really need is more armor for our humv's
Walt

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
Reviewed on June 7, 2007
this powerful write really hits home...
peace and blessings,
carolyn

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on June 6, 2007
So very true Georg! Let us pray that hope never vanishes.......

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Southern Comfort
Reviewed on June 6, 2007
Beautifully and powerfully worded and expressed! Much emotion and deep feelings expressed in a few well chosen words! HUGS! SC

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on June 6, 2007
Hope, we must hold on to hope, and hope we climb above killing other humans. War is a failure of intelligence, and communication... It should be consigned to history. But Bush want's another cold war at europes expense. But now Blair has gone. Mr Brown intends to pull the anglo drawer bridge up with America treating us with disrepect, unless democrates get in, America will be alone in the world...

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on June 6, 2007
Such a stark reality my friend!!

Most powerful Ku!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on June 6, 2007
stark reality Georg, well said!

Eileen

Reviewed by Candy T (Reader)
Reviewed on June 6, 2007
so much said in so few words, ty

Reviewed on June 6, 2007
Most of us have taken those lonesome walks Georg. I felt this poem, touched my soul.

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on June 6, 2007
Such truth in so few words of a perfect 'ku.

Peace,
Dan

Reviewed on June 6, 2007
Spot on excellence, Georg; sad that we honor those who serve(d) on only certain days of the year, when it's convenient. Well done, and thank YOU for YOUR service!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed on June 6, 2007
Great haiku. enjoyed this. Thanks

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on June 6, 2007
Outstanding Ku Georg
Or a wounded soldier in the VA hospital
without a family
thanks for sharing
Peace be with you

William

Reviewed by Morning Star
Reviewed on June 6, 2007
Sad but a true reality
You have expressed this feelings
Very well my friend!
Outstanding haiku
Love And Peace to you always..Morning Star

Reviewed by Guy Hogan
Reviewed on June 6, 2007
It doesn't take many words when the sentiment is so true.

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen
Reviewed on June 6, 2007
You have fantastic and appropriate imagery in this ku, Georg. I feel the ache.

Love,
Susan

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on June 6, 2007
Quite powerful, Georg.

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on June 6, 2007
Sad and true.


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