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The End of Three Ed's War
by Georg E Mateos → (All Poetry by Georg E Mateos)
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Should man think thrice before raising his hand in anger to his brother and forget what is all about the peace, because all can start with an humorous remark, then, all hell is loose and you don't laugh anymore when it is war...


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World has been spinning around in peace
because of thinkers men that were wise,
some had sharp and good functioning minds,
other just the wisdom that come with old age;
resorting to the weapons to win anything
as been part of the problem, not the solution,
our good God has teach us that we most beg
for pardon before He will consider absolution.

So, as Ed the Elder, with me back well covered
I will say to all of you He has thrown the dice,
sable rattling and more bloodshed should stop,
and all men become not a monster but a mice;
at the bottom of the picture we with sadness see
Commodore’s Andy ship just foundering down
while a glimpse of a top sail from Sir Salt Walt
we get, before another ship is gone and drown.

Seventeen well-armed ships sweep old Halifax
giving inspiration to compose to the bagpipers,
and coming down they took all the ladies ships
peeling away the perfumed lace was their price;
when all of them came together, Mon Dieu!
Quelque armada, on my back and disposition,
71 Man of War with 96 cannons onboard each
so even the deaf would hear all of my conditions:

The island will be given to Pee Wee Ed & Ark so,
all the creatures can have a home where’s peace,
it is not just a man that can claim a piece of land,
no member of the Fauna was born by God’s caprice,
no birds had a condition, how and where could fly,
no tiger was born a slave or a piece of collection,
it was man that made the first cage, not for himself,
but for that of all the most precious, his own freedom.

Ed from Jersey, will end all that talking about stinking
by taking a bath to get rid of not good smelling grease,
and the glory of his State will smell like roses when
all that water that he so unwisely sent at last recede;
found by Pee Wee that La Belle Rouge was our sister
so I have a little ace tucked well up my ample sleeve
until somebody buys Louisiana I will go American
and have a petit South Comfort smelling Cherokee.

An so mes amìs, this story ends showing you all
that even if you aren’t an Ed there’s a lot of loyalty,
like First Mate D’rtagnan Bonilla on my right
or that lovely enraged lass which we will call Edith;
I am sure that Rufuz the Keeper of the Ancient Book
will do justice writing all the truth about this war,
we were happily jumping into an un-brotherly fracas
while the words of the Good Book all we forgot.





 

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 Reviews of "The End of Three Ed's War"
Reviewed by Southern Comfort
Reviewed on September 13, 2007
Oh Georgie! All Ya Thinks bout is War! War! War! Hush Up and come on to bed, I am cold! Lets snuggle and to Hell with war! SC

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on September 4, 2007
Ending a war is good...but not a fun one like the Ed's war...it was fun to read..and geeeeee to keep up with you guys/girls!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Reviewed on September 4, 2007
sorry dude....be that as it may..I still be's off to saint Croix..to play...
As dreams of chocolate coated nibbins still dances in me head.
Come and visit some time, the bordello will be doing just fine.
We'll welcome ye with a wee dram.
And if we can find that pig again, we'll have us some ham.



Salty Walt


Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on September 4, 2007
Arr, the saga is over! It's been fun!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on September 3, 2007
I think Pee Wee Ed's Ark can unload all his wonderful animals on the island so the may feast and be free. Mankind can learn to share the island with all the wonderful wild life and live in harmony, just a matter of will power and desire. Great write....

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on September 3, 2007
Aye Captain, Me Captain, Oh! Capitan
My Foil will I sheath, forever more and a day
I'm going to lay down My sword and shield,
down by the riverside and Study War no more
Peace be with you

D'Artagnan

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
Reviewed on September 3, 2007
A war's end -- ALWAYS good.

Should someday we meet along the way
I hope it for us to play
The war is over
The Good Book we shall all embrace
For following that, we will surely win the race.

Kathy
aka Edwina, The Eldest and Cousin Eduardo

Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on September 3, 2007
Thank You Georg...for peaceful thought...so that all hell is not loose.
John

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on September 3, 2007
Blessed are the cheese makers...
But it'll prolly be as effective as chamberlins attempts...

Reviewed by Ann Scarborough
Reviewed on September 3, 2007
Well Lacy Annie is not a happy Pirate. Left out she was in the peacemaking attempt. So Edvard the Elder got Nibbens LaRue! Huh, I'm off to St Croix and this War that seems to me to be more bluff and boast than it will be a war can happen or not.
Lacy Annie

Reviewed by Morning Star
Reviewed on September 3, 2007
Yes you are the peacemaker George
Excellent story poem !!
Love peace and hugsss to you ....Yolie

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on September 3, 2007
Yep, that's you Gerog the one that tries to make peace at all cost. love Holly

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on September 3, 2007
Very well written Georg, Thank you for sharing.
Newfie Hugs,Rose

Reviewed on September 3, 2007
Delightful piece, Georg; bravo!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed on September 3, 2007
Oh, Lord: now it's war; Typical sibling rivalry???? Y'all are so clever. Well done, Georg (I mean, Edvard).

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed on September 3, 2007
have yore Cherokee
ye dispicable hog
I still gots me
Walt Salty Dog
and I thinks had I not
drunk so much a ye rum
our trist woulda been
done before it begun
and ye.. Nibbens LaRue
why ye would walk the plank
if I did what I could do
but I've grown a bit fond of you
so take ole Ed and kill em dead
death by big bazoombas
and when he can't give thee no more
come join me crew on ole St Croix

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on September 3, 2007
Edvard, you are very sage, but this is just a comical comic book, after all. And I apologize if anyone has been offended by it, and if you and La Belle are withdrawing from battle, that is fine.

But the War of the Eds, at least between Pee Wee and the Jersey Devil will never die - There Can Be Only One - Ed!

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on September 3, 2007
At a boy Georg, enough is enough, let peace have a chance.

Reviewed by Flying Fox Ted L Glines (Reader)
Reviewed on September 3, 2007
Sounds good, Georg. That's the spirit! Peace now reigns upon the bounding main. Sleep may rule the briney deep. From my perch high atop my crow's nest ... ah ... what is that I spy? A whole ocean of ships with white flags waving ... and it looks like they are all sneaking up on each other. What do you suppose it means, Cap'n?

(*sly grin*)
Ted

Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury
Reviewed on September 3, 2007
Well done peacemaker.


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