If you love someone so much, set them free...
"Love me or kill me, but never abandon me" by Rabindranah Tagore
I hear the soft steps approaching as
she entered the shadows of my void
like a delicate butterfly unsuspecting
on the net of my sadness so caught.
Her feeble whisperings for help
weren’t heard, she had no a voice,
but a murmur transcending times
and perhaps, yes, out of this world.
I, from the anguished shadow’s deeps
went to see who in my net was the call,
and something ethereal prickled my eyes
with a shy smile that were saying, love.
How she, coming down from the light
could enter the dark realms of my void?
trying to look into a non-existing heart
and be part of something that never was?
Her eyes looking into mine were suddenly
sad, with the realization of broken bones,
scars and a violet aura of rage around
from a child inside, of the man before.
Like the lungs of something unexplained
from the shadow towards the light I blow
that ethereal apparition from my net,
here in my shadows she don’t belong.
Receding back to the deeps without a sun,
I will go to sleep dreaming of her love,
because if you once in your life cared,
don’t hold your butterfly, let her go.
Georg, Yes love is like a butterfly, and yes never suffocate or smother the other let them fly free and flutter and they will return if it's meant to be. Beautiful words here, I am always in awe of your writing talent.
Peace, Love, and Light,
Amber "V"
Stunning butterfly wings
Set it free if it comes back to you
than it's ment to be!!
Beautiful and so very true the last stanza
I agreed George set her free!!
Outstanding write George.
Love Peace and hugssss.....Morning Star
This is so sad, Georg. We all need to be loved, even if we don't believe we deserve to be. It is not up to us to decide if someone else has the right to love us, simply to accept that they do, whether we understand it or not. Our dragons are our own, but that does not mean that someone else cannot aid us in the slaying of them. Powerful offering.
Take care,
Sherry
True love is a light that will always disperse the soul darkness of another and encourage the freedom of individuality. The heart of a true poet composed this lovely and moving piece. Blessings ...
Richard
Shivers of sweet longing that is always not to be run through the lines of this write my friend like the gossamar threads of a spider web...all is attached but such a delicate attachement.
Sometimes only in the shadows some find rest, in the bright lights might burn their wings ,but still let it be where it wants to be, thats real love, and a beautiful sensitive poem George, Bless Ya!
Jasmin Horst
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on October 26, 2007
Oh my ,this is a beauty sweet man,wonderful writing as always,have a wonderful day..Hugssssss
These song lyrics and art are tales, tides and twinkling lights - tunes telling stories of warmth and sun, city and sand, paths that lead, and the coins we can keep in the Karma Bank. Spirit's been bypassed for sorrow, dreaming of a better tomorrow .
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Reflections and Nature Watercolors is a collection of Margaret's spontaneous positive thoughts in celebrating and reflecting on life and her nature watercolors.
Peace, Love, and Light,
Amber "V"
Set it free if it comes back to you
than it's ment to be!!
Beautiful and so very true the last stanza
I agreed George set her free!!
Outstanding write George.
Love Peace and hugssss.....Morning Star
Love,
annie
Take care,
Sherry
Richard
Truly enjoyable reading
Peace B with you Brother
William
Blessings.
Kathy
Christine
Fee
Jasmin Horst
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
This is beautiful. Do not hold on to love too tightly or she will be crushed...well done.
(((((HUGS))))) and love, Karla.