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If you don't love me anymore
by Georg E Mateos → (All Poetry by Georg E Mateos)
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Don't tell me that you never ever were there...thinking about a world that got suddenly empty, and cold, and unfriendly.
Don't tell me that you never had a need for a warm hug...and a little kelchglas that survived the kristallnacht to hold your teas.


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…will the Spring be without
the wings of butterflies,
no bees and no drones,
and no honey otherwise;
the rain will with sadness
will roll down, tears like,
because you left me a world
so full of so many goodbyes.

…will the Summer be without
the warmth that cold defies,
making the whole world to open
with a explosion of life,
and putting in everybody’s face
a million of a great smile;
it wouldn’t be that at all
because you let love to die.

…will the Fall be without
those golden leaves that dries
on the hands of thousand gardens,
where not dreaming of demise
so many a beautiful flower once
look up at the clear blue skies;
nothing on that meadows will be,
after you, tenderness, so brutalized.

…will the Winter be with all that
the winds of pain can extricate
from a frozen heart that stopped
to beg hearing its own cries,
as the candle flickered going out
and let the shadows of agonize
fall over me, because you don’t
love me anymore as I am dying.




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 Reviews of "If you don't love me anymore"
Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
Reviewed on November 18, 2007
well said,like this one. Lady J

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on November 18, 2007
A heart tugging capture of the feelings of parting, for whatever reason...

Carole~

Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Reviewed on November 18, 2007
Don't let the screen door hit you on your way out.

Walt

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on November 17, 2007
Just so beautiful the way you take us on a journey through all the seasons searching, always searching.....

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on November 17, 2007
Love comes , love goes, one enters this world
Head first like diving into a pool
And exit feet first, so you don't see
where you're going
Peace be with you Brother

William

Reviewed by Southern Comfort
Reviewed on November 17, 2007
My Precious! Yore sad words impale my heart with pain. I don't know who hurt you so badly, but she is a foolish woman. I will always love you and thank GOD everyday that you are alive and that you breath. I LOVE YOU and will till the day I draw my last breath! SC

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
Reviewed on November 17, 2007
If you don't love me anymore
just leave, don't try to settle the score
I'll tell you to your face "you were such a bore"
After you're gone, I'll lock the door
and be so sad,
because I truly did love you
It wasn't always bad.

Your poem hits the hearts of all who have been divorced of who have parted way, for whatever reason.

No one should die of a broken heart, but many cannot get passed it. But, it is good to go on living a new and wonderful dance/season.
God bless you, always. Kathy

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on November 17, 2007
STrong and intense as the very bitterest of those winter winds is the affect this poem has on the reader...


Fee

Reviewed by Randall Barfield
Reviewed on November 17, 2007
Yes, strange, sad, and a lament it is. Great atmospheric phrases and words. Cheers

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on November 17, 2007
Bittersweet...sad....cold....colorful....description of a broken heart...with many scars..but still beating...just to keep you going!!

Emotionally drained!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen
Reviewed on November 17, 2007
georg, i like the way that you brought the seasons into this work. and your use of imagery is inspiring. you are right, we've all known this pain.

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on November 17, 2007
Georg, We have all been here. This is a poem that captures those moments that we all face when someone falls out of love with another.
Very insightful and very heart touching.
Peace, Love, and Light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on November 17, 2007
You cover the seasons of sadness so well when love is lost and one is left without the warmth of a loving woman.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on November 17, 2007
A lost love or a broken heart can find no happiness in any season,
But if and when we find it again - every day is like the first day of Spring.

Reviewed on November 17, 2007
This powerfully penned sadness is written from a broken heart. May you find happiness one day, (((Georg))).

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :(

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on November 17, 2007
Great writing,hope all is well dear man,sorry I havent been here much,been so busy with my work..and by the way I luv you always..stay safe and well ...Hugssssssssss

Reviewed on November 17, 2007
Brilliant poem, Georg; but it brims with sadness. Hope you are okay; you are in my prayers!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :(

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on November 17, 2007
The seasons of the heart so sad, may it find song and happiness. Your poem is Brilliant, I love it.
Christine

Reviewed on November 17, 2007
Georg whatever is inspiring you of late I hope it always will. A brilliant write, you are loved Sweet Friend.


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