From the top of the mountain looking down,
this indian brave, from the proud tribe’s Sioux,
saw the prairie empty of bison and teepees
and his heart ached as it became empty too,
but then, by the waters of that dying river,
a Cherokee maiden emerged, so beautiful,
it was soft waves coming together and then
like a bronze and tantalizing little figure
she was tall, over everything, a little star
reflecting the ray’s sun like something new
emerging from a river full of wrinkles, old,
an virgin appearing from a water cocoon.
Raising my eyes to all the cloudless skies,
I sent a prayer of thanks to my father Manitou
for let me see a wonder that no Medicine man
even if we wished to make one, he couldn’t,
not to create from the plain’s humble tribe
such ethereal being making my heart joyful,
yet, so distant from the top of the mountain
where this old brave is without a drop of youth,
longing to take in his arms that jewel below
and pressed her hard, until she become a tattoo
which no man can erase from my old chest but
that her love’ spear could always come through.
I was made of the finest smoke going up there,
taking a little Cherokee to the sky was this Sioux.
and then I awoke and looked around me
within a wooden starcade Of 4 log walls
A prisoner beacause all i wanted was to be free
and roamed the prairie.......
Peace be with you
William
Fee
You daily bring me great comfort and warmth! I LOVE YOU! Yore Cherokee Maiden
Walt
Blessings ...
Richard
satisfying in it's resolve...wonderful writing!
Carole~
I really thought this poem was well written and it grabbed my attention.
Peace, Love, and Light,
Amber "V"
Then how will you conjoin with them and the parairies...?
Bah humbug! Your just itchin' for a How!
LOL!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
Love Tinka
BEAUTIFULLY imaged and penned, how I wish I were that Cherokee maiden! To be tattooed to your chest...sigh. :) Well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D
Beautiful flowing words,, I see her emerging from the wrinkled river. Georg this is exquisite
Christine
I like the flow of this and of course, it's sensuality!
R~