Sometimes what you have to say will not go out from the tip of your tongue or from the tip of your quill.
Some words chokes one more than other, and then, they are those never spoken but that you understood were for you.
This one was inspired by Founding True Love
by Jasmin Horst E.P. Seiler
I can’t start this letter with a Dear:
because I don’t feel anymore that way,
we were two roads briefly crossing and
now we are going, how can I say…
in different directions, leading hearts
taking us not back to our yesterday.
Before, this pages were of pristine white,
words make them so dirty to appear may
that not after scribbling LOVE we can
erase that blot of ink for what I didn’t felt,
please, if you like me, don’t feel the same,
don’t let your heart be filled with contempt.
This will be just like a postcard in brevity,
maybe like receiving a knife you will take,
that what we had is there no more for me
wasn’t courageous enough to personally tell,
because you are the one good with words
I only are good as I can make my pretty face.
The privilege to pick and choose is feminine,
la donna e mobile, Giuseppe Verdy once said,
it wasn’t you…or me, it was the damn absence,
get over me soldier, another hill you can conquer,
that war wouldn’t last forever you will be back
and into the arms of a new loving Jezebel.
I can’t start this letter with a Dear:
because I don’t feel anymore that way.
HMMMMM, JUST THINKING...THIS IS ONE OF THE THINGS THAT MAKES SOLDIERS...SOLDIERS! A MOST PROFOUND WORK. THANKS FOR SHARING, LOVE AND BLESSINGS, JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
YES! I call it "relate" feeling that same deep constant feeling!
Wonderful poem written!Feels like a song!
I am happy you are back! in our open arms Georg!
I hope you enjoyed being at the places your presense was welcomed in!
Warmed in the Spirit, Warrior Purple Lady Sweet Sheooxoo
STay Positive!
Find your Inner Peace! Keep in close to you my friend!
The inner turmoil of two walking separate paths can only hurt yet it can also bring inner peace and tranquility as time passes along. Sometimes that is the way it has to be, but the pain lingers on....
I pictured this poor guy, stunned with the news, but quickly came to his senses after thinking about the "Mess Hall Musing's Party" he went to last night and picked the last petal from the Daisy, saying, "She loves me not!'
Seeyabetch!
LOL!
Loved it!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
...how does one seal the closure of this letter...when there is no longer sweetness in the lip...to hold the final thoughts within the envelope.
sensitively and beautifully expressed George...
John
You my friend carry much pain, when love is cast away cheaply, it hurts twice as much, and if it was deeply felt can hurt forever. Had it been normal times, not war, you might have found some refuge, but being in the wilderness without an oasis and a drink of love to find anywhere you have been scarred a very deep wound of war! Bless you my friend! Jasmin Horst
I loved him. At age twelve he touched my heart with his music. At age twenty he captured my heart when our eyes met as he sat on a stage and sang Four months later, he fractured my heart with his refusal to allow us to stay together. At age seventy
God bless you. Kathy
Wonderful poem written!Feels like a song!
I am happy you are back! in our open arms Georg!
I hope you enjoyed being at the places your presense was welcomed in!
Warmed in the Spirit, Warrior Purple Lady Sweet Sheooxoo
STay Positive!
Find your Inner Peace! Keep in close to you my friend!
Be safe,
Karen
enjoyed reading
peace be with you brother
Did I say Wecome back ????
William
Most bitter/sweet, ole chap...
ET
Regis
Fee
Thanks for sharing !!
Love Tinka
Christine
Seeyabetch!
LOL!
Loved it!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
sensitively and beautifully expressed George...
John
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :(
But then I have written a few of those myself. Somehow it balances out.
Walt
Poignancy runs like tears through this pen...excellently expressed. The ultimate "Dear John" letter...
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :(
because I don’t feel anymore that way.
So very, very sad, my brother.