I wrote this poem listening at Mozart's Lacrimosa chorus from Requiem, it gives a soul to every word, if you got a tear in your eyes, it wasn't included in the poem.
If you never embraced true love, it is nothing wrong to do it to an imaginary one...
Magical compendium, the forest,
shedding leaves like pages of a book,
and among them and old oak tree
wearing someone names in a heart
looking more like a hasty crook.
But we were lovers then, who cared,
how that carved little heart of ours
which your delicate fingers drew
and my pen-knife cut, we didn’t cared
how to any by passer would it look.
You asked me in that summer night
if I could bring down to you the moon,
after my arrow had pierced the heart
of a sun falling in red far and beyond;
the answer only could be, “of course.”
Then, through your body, impertinently,
a cold breeze produced a little shrug,
the skin of your arms went goose pimple
my jacked over your shoulders I put
letting my arms to stay around all of you.
The fingers of Selene lighted your eyes
as your face, to kiss me, was rising up,
the shadows parted in that little knoll
where we were embracing each other,
enveloping our beings, a lover’s cocoon.
We didn’t want a summer morning, nor
to open the eyes and see Selene gone,
the naked skin, warming with new day
and covered with predawn dew drops,
melted together with passion once more.
We never parted, that, we never did,
you was my dream and I was yours,
night was that mystic moment for,
when I felt inside you all the warmth
which I will ever need, until I am gone.
A contribution to La Belle Rouge's Love Challenge.
Georg, You romantic you..This poem is truly heaven sent. Powerful emotions are felt as you read each line..Very nicely done.
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
The romantic in you takes my breath away. My favorite line "we never parted, that, we never did" To know such a lasting love fills my romantic heart with joy.
Georg, the expressions and the mood that is set is a magnificent one. The drawing of lovers to become one is so infinite in this vast world. Mozart's Requium was written in dedication to his over powerful father, right? Love his music, Mozart and Brahms are my two favorites.....
Wooow you are a true romantic
your words can melt a woman's heart
And take her into a magical dream journey where
She does not want to wake-up from!!
Absolutely brilliant yes Mr Casanova!!
Peace Love and hugssss...Morning Star
Ah, you little Casanova, you melted the ladies hearts with this one I bet. You are a true romantic, I remember that forest, it brought back similar memories. You also have extremely good taste in music, I can see you painting your poem, and dreaming your dream, it is almost as a bygone age revisited, you are a true romantic artist in a timewarp. Bless you! Jasmin Horst
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
Romantic feelings just let in!
Write On!
Warmest Blessings and Hugs, Warrior Purple Lady Sheooxoo
STay Positive!
That is what I call ~ to be under Erato's Grace ~ accompanied by Euterpe and Aphrodite.
"When Love is Everything" glows and flows as a romantic sublime masterpiece.
I salute You, Poet
In admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
God bless you. Kathy
Fee
Be always safe,
Karen
Love,
ET
really beautiful Georg...
John
the shadows parted in that little knoll
were we were embracing each other,
enveloping our beings, a lover’s cocoon.
-David
your words can melt a woman's heart
And take her into a magical dream journey where
She does not want to wake-up from!!
Absolutely brilliant yes Mr Casanova!!
Peace Love and hugssss...Morning Star
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D
Here I am, puddled on the floor - this is beautifully penned - well done. To know love like this -
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.