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Love, magnolias and a little child (part one)
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The Colonel has received a letter from his Southern Belle telling him about his new born son.
And he returns home...


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As a man not blessed with eloquent words,
forced, my innermost feelings for you to write;
with everybody asleep in the house and dew
from the early morning falling on my hands,
too much happened, too sudden in the chaos
left by a war that made a Nation going wild,
a letter telling me of you and the birth of a son
where the spurs needed to make my horse to fly.

From Charlottesville, there wasn’t a short cut,
traveling with twenty two able men day and night,
just churning ahead, returning home, going across
that piece of our devastated and tortured land,
until the Santee Rivers greeted us with its waves
perhaps happy to see that Southerners were back,
and the long alley bordered with magnolia trees
which would end, of the house, on its front yard.

Tired but exited to be home we approached and saw,
your massive Rose-Mae standing with crossed arms
it that dilapidated porch, a formidable guardian force,
watchfully eyes scouting at us from the distance,
until she recognized me and with a twister of aprons
shouting your name and waving hands she went inside,
as young Mamee saw behind me her faithful Jeremiah
proudly riding home wearing on his face a big smile.

Then, my sweet little thing, out on the porch you came,
and I could see the shining of tears in your eyes
you wished to believe it for so long, and yet, couldn’t,
until my horse stopped in front of your house at last,
I don’t really remember what happened next because
it was an explosion of such joy pouring out of my heart
that everything was hidden by a fog of happiness,
and memory did falter after you went inside my arms.

The men dismounted and went to put up the tents,
from looters we had confiscated two full heavy carts
with food that we all would share with our neighbors,
and each soldier returning home would get his part,
God bless all of them for having take care of me,
and should I be blessed because I did survive,
and can sit wrapped in peaceful silence at home
on an early morning, as magnolias perfume my life.




 

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 Reviews of "Love, magnolias and a little child (part one)"
Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
Reviewed on February 23, 2008
The perfume of life - written as one who [perhaps] has felt this indescribable joy. Tears of joy run down my face.

God bless you. Kathy

Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on February 20, 2008
...not stop force...driven with excellence...this journey home.
wonderful writing Georg...
John

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on February 20, 2008
...' A fog of happiness',.......'On an early morning, as magnolias perfume me life'... BEAUTIFUL, I LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on February 19, 2008
I just love it Georg as you take us through the times and the journey, fantastic as I follow you. Thank you.

Newfie Hugs, Rose
Now I can read on....

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on February 19, 2008
What a marvelous homecoming, for any soldier, in any war ever fought, General Georg.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on February 19, 2008
Again you bring us back into history and make it come alive with the beauty and poignancy of the old South and those painful days of past that sometimes did have some rays of sun...

Fee

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on February 18, 2008
The saga continues and seems to grow and develop over time, well done....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on February 18, 2008
and the soap opera continues
excellent write George, you and labelle
should join forces and collaborate a few
war and peace novels.....
Peace be with you Brother

William

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on February 18, 2008
George, you turn this story/poem into a magnificent read, that could be a novel!Thank you for sharing your gift!

Reviewed on February 18, 2008
May Magnolia blossoms forever fall on you, and on your book of poetry. Just wonderful! Jasmin Horst

Reviewed on February 18, 2008
Oh my, this gave me goose bumps and tears, so emotive and just beautiful Georg.

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on February 18, 2008
you know how to turn on the tears,, this is EXQUISITE,, you are so talanted. looking forward to part two.
Christine

Reviewed on February 18, 2008
Beautifully penned, Georg, the reader is immediately taken into your story - excellent. I love this series!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed on February 18, 2008
In the holy army of Poetry You have been appointed to FIVE STARS' RANK with all stars inside of a crown of leaves of ACACIA.

"Love, magnolias and a little child (part one)" enriches literature and adds value to the American Fine Letters.

In admiration,

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed on February 18, 2008
Marvelous story within these image-filled lines; you have taken to writing poetry to a whole new level! BRAVO! EXCELLENT pen!!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on February 18, 2008
Agree with Cryssa, well done

Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on February 18, 2008
Your use of powerful imagery takes the reader to the unfolding scene.

Cryssa :~)


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