We wander in a pitch black Universe, alone with our fears, disoriented, lost, open eyes seeing nothing, soul crimping, waning spirit...we are the travelers.
Nebula hiding the universe with shadows for a
traveler without a home going from star to star,
like a reincarnated King Midas touching places,
places where for a small black-hole you can buy
a two warps supernova or a very small galaxy,
but never a twenty light years across golden sun.
With the pockets full of moons and planet’s rings,
the traveler are weighed down, but he don’t want
to leave all of his beautiful cosmic bijouterie
like one worthless pile of fool’s gold behind,
so he keeps on going for eons in a wild search
of that empty space where you can bend the time.
But, marvel and behold, the empty universe is not
that empty, without hurting eyes there’s a light,
that no shadow ever could escape nor resist
because it is coming endless forever and so bright,
that from the deepest and most secret of places
He said, “I am tired of darkness, let be a light”
The traveler in awe almost with reverent fear
let his soul fell on its knees and say it aloud,
“is that you my Lord? I should wander no more?”
but silence was the answer as the wonder went by
and the traveler ran after “it” tears blurring his eyes
“is that you my Lord?” he felt ignored, left behind.
Suddenly the traveler stopped in obscurity’s center
and was converted in the vortex of the revolving light
closing on him from above, climbing from below,
the traveler was surrounded by every other side,
until all of him melted in and was part of it, hearing
the most beloved whisper, “My son I Am in your heart”
Now he knew what eternity was all about, because,
of billions of universes he was now one little part
going forever and ever to that, the endless pleasure
of be part of an eternal flame that couldn’t go out
because He said, that darkness was pain and solitude
and for that He commanded, “lets have the Light”
A well written poetic work of art my friend...captivating is the single word that describes this best for me. The imagery is very clear...inspiring indeed!
Blessings,
Joyce B.
And still they fear the darkness, where no shadows cast, no reflections willow, wherin the soul finds rest, bring on the light they say, so that we may forever cast our shadow upon your creation, and not lay shallow in our grave, the ego does not want to die!
A wonderful poem, brought to light, with a visual kaleidoscope!
Blessings! Jasmin Horst
...Georg how beautiful is this poetry...of light...enlightenment...of all light...and in heart...one of my favorites...of the many pieces you have penned.
absolutely beautiful...
John
Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on May 16, 2008
Let me live in the light...walk in the light and love the light. Blessings my dear friend, love Holly
What beauty and enlightenment you have written, dear friend! I hope our "libraries" have been repaired, for this is surely a keeper! I bow to you, poet, for this Wonder!
Blessing and Appreciation and Love ~~ Micke
because He said, that darkness was pain and solitude
and for that He commanded, “lets have the Light”
Powerful God's light shines throughout this page
beautiful inspiring words of wisdom
Absolutely Brilliant Georg
Peace Love and Light...and hugesss too....Morning Star
I see the light in this piece of majestic write. He is part of God's love and is finding it on his travels. The light came to him to find him and he was saved and guided on his way.
This POEM is really classical!!!!!!!!! Every sentences in this poem is on high level....'Nebula hiding the universe with shadows for a traveler without a home going from star to star'----BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!! 'With the pockets full moons and planets rings'---VERY TALENTED!!!!!!!!! I never met before like this!!!!!!!! ....' My son I AM in your heart'---MOST BEAUTIFUL, I JUST LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
You have described the light so eloquently, and it made this reader feel like she was right there with this traveler. Bravo, a brilliant piece of work!!!
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
Sending you some reiki healing energy, Georg and a motherly hug!
These song lyrics and art are tales, tides and twinkling lights - tunes telling stories of warmth and sun, city and sand, paths that lead, and the coins we can keep in the Karma Bank. Spirit's been bypassed for sorrow, dreaming of a better tomorrow .
Your writing is great and a plaesure to read
Peace Brother
William
Newfie Hugs, Rose
I loved the conclusion.
Cryssa
God bless you. Kathy
Blessings,
Joyce B.
A wonderful poem, brought to light, with a visual kaleidoscope!
Blessings! Jasmin Horst
A full round mathematical cabalistic thirty-six brilliant cut diamond pieces set on six rings of poetic cosmologic light.
I have enjoyed the reading of "The Light" for all its glorious literary contents; ~ philosophic imagery and poetic brilliance.
I salute You, Poet.
In admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
absolutely beautiful...
John
Blessing and Appreciation and Love ~~ Micke
because He said, that darkness was pain and solitude
and for that He commanded, “lets have the Light”
Powerful God's light shines throughout this page
beautiful inspiring words of wisdom
Absolutely Brilliant Georg
Peace Love and Light...and hugesss too....Morning Star
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Fee
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D
so he keeps on going for eons in a wild search,
of that empty space where you can bend the time.
Alas, how so very true, for so many, brother. A most Enlightening poetic tale.
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
Sending you some reiki healing energy, Georg and a motherly hug!