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Went by a beautiful cathedral, pity, was empty,
after crossing a plaza paved with cobblestones,
and, as I knew that inside me was not a heart
my feet kept on going, by that beauty didn’t stop,
because my road was to be the longest of one
where at the end, be not a light and not a hope.
As I was getting away by a stucco walled street
between the poor houses and the cathedral stones,
it surprised me that some one could build so big
a church and laid beside, a narrow street so small,
that let a single man just getting through by it,
or two passersby being forced against the walls.
Thinking that I was lucky, I hurried up the street,
when a old man in rags saw me and didn’t stop
until we were in front of each other and he said,
“What’s with you son? not going inside my house?”
it took me by surprise, I wished to go by and said,
“Old man get out of my way, I am not your son”
“Are you so sure of me not being your father?”
he said with a smile, not with a challenging voice,
“you see, you asked for my help so many times,
now you tell me that you don’t recognize your God?”
very gentle with my hands on his chess I pushed
him aside, and squeeze me own body through.
Crazy but benevolent old man, didn’t pushed back,
and I continued my journey towards the “world”
that I knew was somewhere out there and waiting
for me, after leaving behind the one with no hope,
promises were ahead, like a mirage in my eyes
with more determinate steps I then proceeded to.
That lonely road had no tracks of any travelers,
like no one had ventured to walk there before,
in the distance approaching me was a young man,
sandals kicking sand, carrying carpenter’s tools,
“I saw you talking to my father back there” he said
with that same smile, ”will you believe, I am his son?”
“Go in peace” I said, “I am just a traveler passing by,
and from me or my thoughts you should fear not,
your father is a good man which I respected as I do
with all my elders, because one day I also will be old,
take good care of him or one day will be taken away
if he goes around telling strangers of he being God.”
I walked until the last rays of the sun, like fingers
holding at the horizon’s edge didn’t want to let go,
when at the road side I heard a crying little child
with the softest and heartbreaking of a child sobs,
“what’s the matter?” I asked, trying not to frighten
the little one there, in the near dark and all alone.
“You will not believe” he said with a sobbing hiccup,
“because you didn’t recognize the Father or the Son,
that it was my bad luck that among all the angels
they pick me for the guardian of your unbelieving soul,
don’t go further, because…it is nothing out there,
here is the end, a crying angel and a man that’s lost”
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First I must compliment you on the way you write, it is very clean and direct. The truth is coming from your pen without any hesitation. You describe the old man and the son, and the cathedral with the tiny street which brings an enormous contrast and irony. While reading your write I felt the fire which is burning in you to reach the unknown goal, which normally will unveil itself to you one day without any words and in a clarity that you cannot describe. We human beings on earth became so entangled with our intellect that we hardly can see what lay in front of us and even less what lay within us. Let me give you my blessing, so you will hopefully continue in the right direction, even without leaving home. Love to you and to all your loved ones. Your friend, Emile
The end is vacant discovery: "it is nothing out there, here is the end." Questions unanswered after a long lonely journey.
Cynthia
I have enjoyed the reading of wise ontologic-teleological composition... - a masterspiece in any scale.
The closing lines were written with flawsless diamond letters:
\\ don’t go further, because…it is nothing out there,
here is the end, a crying angel and a man that’s lost” //
I salute You, Poet.
In respect and admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Cryssa
Christine
They are many none believers
I read this poem two times and both times
it left me thinking especially your last six stanza
Absolutely brilliant!
Love Peace and Light...and hugessss too...Morning Star
Richard
This is one heck of a poem! I had to read it twice, you give much to think about and ponder over.
Simply amazing...
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
Be always safe,
Karen
A compelling, poetic story to awaken our thoughts...beautifully written...
Blessings and Love ~~ Micke
Peace,
Dan
Regis
"Went by a beautiful cathedral, pity, was empty" opens the pathway to eternal life (salvation) or damnation. Broad is the road that leads to destruction; narrow is the one that leads to eternal life; few find it. A powerful, powerful message in this one, your best, yet - keeper. Thank you.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Blessings,
Joyce B.
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D
most excellent write Georg...
John