Ms. Jill Eisnaugle gave us the challenge to try our hand at renting that special home, and there is mine.
Sorry folk, I haven't got that Realtor's Diploma, but, what the heck! here it goes...
The house is not too big, but big enough,
with an attic full of rhymes if you ever need
to write a love song to an absent love one
or a little lullaby to a rosy cherub in the crib.
The white picket fence needs a little paint,
but covered with flowers, paint you don’t need,
and with all the windows welcoming open
a visitor will be staying, its name? Spring!
A little and private room you will find facing
sunup, if you are an early bird, by the East,
there is a table with a stack of virgin paper,
pencils, the room where Muse Erato sleeps.
Every corner of the house and even its walls
have hear from many a writer reciting poetry,
the floors of the house are made with rhymes
and the roof is strong, build with great fantasy.
There’s not a sign of a Realtor for a humble nest,
the house is for rent, but not to anybody’ wish,
because the ones wishing to live here my friends,
need to have in their blood the poet’s curiosity.
The cat come with the house, and in the mornings
you should attend that the birds get their seeds,
and if a cheeky squirrel happens to come by, for
Heaven sake don’t read a poem or it will never leave.
Now, The Poetic Home is for rent
and you should apply but only here,
if you have a poet inside your heart…
that’s the only thing I need to hear.
I think you captured a poet's personality in this very house and I for one, would live life with a smile in such a place. Does it come with maid service?
...facing east...the room I choose to awaken in...loving words poured in the foundation...give this poetic architects home...all the writes of creative living.
I'll take it Georg...
John
You might not be a realtor, Georg, but based on your description, I'll rent your house. My white picket fence at my actual house needs paint! This poem has such a wonderful definition of "home."
Thanks for answering the challenge. You've mastered it!
Jill
I love it Georg and
I will apply right away,
for I can move right into it today.
I'll share my poetic heart,
The words I feel right from the start.
How about that.
Thank you for sharing a great write and I love all the little creatures except June Bugs.
Awesome poetic thoughts on this home for rent
Your words captured the beauty of poetry
And fantastic images of the beauty of spring this is
The loving home we all dream of
A stunning Poetic home!!
Peace Love and Light and hugessss too....Morning Star
loved it! I can vision this in my backyard! My two granddaughters would love it! I love line; an attic rhymes...sounds almost mysterious! I love cats, and birds...just bought a new bird bath today! But the squirrles, they're cute...but deadly on bulbs! Oh well, maybe I'll try to capture their attention by reading them a poem, about the ill side effects of digging up and eating bulbs! Great write...I would probably rent it!
Blessings,
Joyce B.
Two Questions: Does it come with a hot man to be inspiration to my poetry, and is there water nearby (a sea, lake, brook, pond, ocean?)
If you can answer yes to both, then I will take it!!!!! lol
Great poem.
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
How much, would love it. Not much cleaning and lots of pets for company. Who could ask for anything more? Great challenge and write. Best wishes, Bonnie
I have written a chapter called I Am That, I Am in this inspirational compilation book by best-selling authors and wonderful people from all walks of life xox :-D (Its sister book is called Adventures In Manifesting - Success and Spirituality)
When two men hit the reset button and decide to go out looking for the good in the world, they not only find it but also a lot more.
P.S. The title is listed on Amazon under Look for Something Good by Robert Drews (not by Robert H. Drews)
:~)
Cryssa
Peace brother
William
there are alot of nice poetic homes to choose from, I shaLL put this on my list
Embraced ~ Embrassé
Vickie
ET
Fee
I'll take it Georg...
John
:)Christine
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Thanks for answering the challenge. You've mastered it!
Jill
I will apply right away,
for I can move right into it today.
I'll share my poetic heart,
The words I feel right from the start.
How about that.
Thank you for sharing a great write and I love all the little creatures except June Bugs.
Newfie Hugs, Rose
Your words captured the beauty of poetry
And fantastic images of the beauty of spring this is
The loving home we all dream of
A stunning Poetic home!!
Peace Love and Light and hugessss too....Morning Star
Blessings,
Joyce B.
If you can answer yes to both, then I will take it!!!!! lol
Great poem.
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :)