I couldn't lie to you, I could mantain the illusion and let the third be the last, but then you wouldn't have known the truth.
This is the epilogue of the whispering, happy ends are for suckers that con men put in heart formed box of chocolates to perpetuate the illusion of Valentine’s Day and that “forever after” end of the princess and the frog, when in reality she married a money loaded schmuck and the frog didn’t got kissed and we never will know if a prince was there waiting that kiss on the frog.
Life sometimes are what she is, cruel and sadistic, with hard long nails and steel fingers to go inside your chest and grab your heart and yank it out feeling its final beats with the satisfaction of a “I told you so”
We loved…and we lost.
Whisper's Epilogue
All one hundred and fifteen feet of her
the old girl is a Benetti Classic of steel
with a pouting bow aiming to the skies
with millions of stars waiting for her kiss;
anyone feeling a want for a promenade…
decks of well scrubbed polished teak,
cushions over cushions to where sprawl
if you fancy a paneled salon in mahogany.
The rich Afghan carpets knitted by hand
will soften every step of anyone’s walk,
and the crystal tumblers in their holders
are there ready to be filled with your liquor,
would be it an Irish Jameson cream whiskey
or from Jamaica a Captain Morgan’s Rum
making the ice dices noisily to dance as you
look around at the emptiness of the room.
The morning after came as always it does
after a night of tender discoveries, too soon,
the road astern was calling her to go away
the sinking ship made of feelings to abandon
because the lovers didn’t owned tomorrow
and yesterday was for them already gone,
as eyes drowned in tears, goodbye converted
in an unspeakable insulting four letters word.
The gravel of the road sung with protest as
the wheels rolled away from the empty dock
and the arms of the old oak tree felt down
no wishing another next Spring to welcome
as there are not enough left water to quench
the thirst to be suck by its unwilling roots.
Will she remember? oh yes! its been branded
by a white hot passion in the flesh of both.
All the technical trimming up top awaits
to sail, once you decided on the bridge
where to go, if you have a strong idea, or,
if to fall at the end of the world you wish;
this old girl of a boat will take you there
over any storm, because she is your ship,
but sorry mate, like the Flying Dutchman,
you will be sailing alone forever, like him.
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Reviews of "Love...I can't whisper anymore"
Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on October 21, 2008
As I said befor Georg
Your words are like the strokes of an artist
Upon the canvass a master of Poetic description
Peace be with you Bother
Ouch, I've missed you and yet your presence in pen fills the air surrounding your life's palette. May you paint forever and my eyes never tire of your emerging masterpieces. < < < <HUGS>>>> Mikii
Your whisper is loud in my heart,
of the magnificent love that never was,and this finale is written with the most eloquent words,and exquisite touch of class making this farce
an outstanding series!
Woow Georg so sad you captured beautiful emotion
This brought tears to my eyes
I love romance but it always brings tears
to my eyes when there's not a happy ending!
I love this collection of whisper!
Peace Love and Light...Morning Star
Wow Georg this really strikes hard at the core of one's heart as you envelop both a love of the sea, a valiant ship and the journey of love taken, given and lost through the annals of time everlasting....
The ebbs and tides of life and love crossing the bow, slicing and dicing all the emotions, in an ocean of tears and laughter. Wagner could have used you in his dramatic epics, you are tops.
Blessings! Jasmin Horst
Some may say it is better to have loved than not, I don't know about that. In my case, my love has never been reciprocated so sometimes, when the bitterness overcomes me, it seems like a big waste of time and energy. BUT! Hope springs ever eternal most of the time and I dream... This has been a beautiful and sad story. Thank you for sharing it with us, Georg. Rebecca
What a beautiful sad love poem powerfully penned by your hand. It touches the soul and takes it with it throughout this lovely write while we hold back our tears hoping, just hoping. Great write my friend. Love, Bonnie
After losing her boyfriend in a accident, Alecia believe she's been seeing him. But that can't possibly be? When Brayden reveals himself, or his soul, he asks her of a favor. But when that favor leads to her revealing feelings for her dead boyfriends
Your words are like the strokes of an artist
Upon the canvass a master of Poetic description
Peace be with you Bother
William
of the magnificent love that never was,and this finale is written with the most eloquent words,and exquisite touch of class making this farce
an outstanding series!
Love,
ET
"Love...I can't whisper anymore" close the siries in a glowing style.
I have enjoyed the "Whisper" Series.
Thank You for sharing Your works.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
This brought tears to my eyes
I love romance but it always brings tears
to my eyes when there's not a happy ending!
I love this collection of whisper!
Peace Love and Light...Morning Star
Be always safe,
Karen
fee
Cheers,
Dan
Blessings,
Marcia
Blessings! Jasmin Horst
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Newfie hugs, Rose
Sandie Angel :o)
Better to have loved and lost, then never to have loved at all, brother.
And if you need a deck hand on that floating mansion of yours, me and me dogs are ready!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :)
BTW, "The Sniper's Song" arrived and I am looking forward to an excellent read.
Ted
Edwin