It was real or just another figment of fantasy? But, it couldn't be, because all over my skin I am wearing the scent she left there, like a love tattoo made of thousand lustful touches, yes, she was there, or...
Illustration, photo of the Confederate Oak
Umbra, the garden is sleeping wrapped in,
coyly moon hiding inside darken clouds
testing with a white finger here and there,
squirrel shadows running when disturbed
like small gossamer and ethereal creatures
mimicking Autumn’s leaves when blown.
In the middle an old and enormous oak tree
at seven paces from the well if going south,
we sat there, all of one long summer night
tasting a kiss without a end, it never could,
our lips got melted, blended into each others
with a tender agony, an elixir for the souls.
Remember my caress? Fingers got entangled
inside the wild flames of your hair all around
until the hand stops when touching your face
that was hiding in the oak’s umbra, withdrawn,
with a secret mischievous smile pulling my head
so in the deeps of your bosom I could drown.
That night was the first time or our only one?
time does all memorable things blurred down,
but my skin remember the soft touch of yours,
it was like pure silk by vestals virgins worn
slithering over me with promises of tomorrows
as you make me feel…like an Olympus god.
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Reviews of "Love in the garden's shadows (part one)"
Hi Georg, whether is was one night or the only one, it will always slither over you with promises of tomorrow. That's what love and passion does. That's what this write does...you Olympus god, you :]
ahhhh Edvard,i remember watching you that night, I wanted to run and tell ma, but jersey devil stopped me and said, "let's just watch, to see what he does"...Pee wee was asleep, he would have told ma;-)
Wow! I am enraptured by your evanescent imagery Georg!
What lovely and spirit-filled writing, from a loving - giving and knowing heart! "YOURS"
I am blown away! as I sense
this deep yearning of love and appreciation
all over this page and in your heart pour out!
WRITE ON!
Can't wait for Part 2
Warmest Blessings, Love and Hugs, Purple Lady Passion, SHEExooo
P.S. Georg - Whether fantasy or real, glad "YOU" were there and felt, and smelled the scents that e ruptured!
and she...the gracile dance of love's fragrance
inserted her profusions of her longing heart for you;
into the deepest chambers of your soul...her keepsake...
to know the essence of love's breadth across the miles of all eternity...
Georg, I could feel and see what you wrote in this most masterfully crafted poem of love and fantasy. You certainly have that gift to draw the reader right into your world.
Thank you my dear man,
Amber "V"
A very sensuous rendering Georg.
I adored reading "Love in the garden's shadows (part one)"
Wonderful and alluring images cast upon the vast openess of the majestic oaks and at the same time exudes a very secretive bird's eye view of it all.
Thanks for sharing this garden fantasy.
All the best and take care,
Gwendolyn
The Matchmaker:
Angela Calminetti, mother of five, New Age practitioner and gifted psychic and telepath, is proud of her family ties and does everything she can to make sure that all of her younger siblings are as happy in love and marriage
In Spirit,
Bear
Newfie Hugs, Rose
fee
Beautiful remembrance brother Edvard (i think;-)
love,
sis tiger lily
TL
Mark
What lovely and spirit-filled writing, from a loving - giving and knowing heart! "YOURS"
I am blown away! as I sense
this deep yearning of love and appreciation
all over this page and in your heart pour out!
WRITE ON!
Can't wait for Part 2
Warmest Blessings, Love and Hugs, Purple Lady Passion, SHEExooo
P.S. Georg - Whether fantasy or real, glad "YOU" were there and felt, and smelled the scents that e ruptured!
inserted her profusions of her longing heart for you;
into the deepest chambers of your soul...her keepsake...
to know the essence of love's breadth across the miles of all eternity...
(coming soon to a den near you)
Carole~
Thank you my dear man,
Amber "V"
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Quite a masterpiece, Mr. Romantic; and LOL at our Brother Jersey!
I'll take a cold beer now...LOL
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D *gasp, gasp, gasp* LOL
EDWIN
A very sensuous rendering Georg.
I adored reading "Love in the garden's shadows (part one)"
Wonderful and alluring images cast upon the vast openess of the majestic oaks and at the same time exudes a very secretive bird's eye view of it all.
Thanks for sharing this garden fantasy.
All the best and take care,
Gwendolyn