After "Love in the Garden's Shadows" (part one and two) this is the sequel of those two poems after him found in the morning that she was gone...but where she was gone if anywhere?
She wanders aimlessly in shadows dust
fate’s whirlwind that covers her world,
poor tender, delicate and feminine lover
with nowhere to stay and nowhere to go.
Your man under that old oak tree, carved
with the knife of remembrance the words
that will tell, “night are not forever as you
read this lines, you will never be left alone.”
Crimson, the sun bleed over the horizon,
night would seems, to any desperate soul,
to bring much more darkness than there is,
solitude among a million people is so long!
She still wander aimlessly, without chains,
and yet, she’s the captive woman by gloom,
hope, she has used of hope its last tiny bit
and at the end of her tunnel is a black wall.
Your man under magnolia trees, shouted,
for destiny give you peace a little sojourn
from the heart feeling the consuming pains
and granted to you that soft promised love-
Crimson, a sun will yawn over the horizon,
morning will be again some times soon,
and another more benign of whirlwinds
will dissipate those darkness clouds of dust.
I am by the river, always I will be there until
the last day, until the last second on the clock,
you must believe it, my Prisoner of Sadness,
as with bare hands your chains I will broke.
WOW Georg, that's all I can say { OK maybe not all LOL }
This one takes the breath away, held me in my chair till the last word
Wonderfully penned, I enjoyed
The Buzzard
Quite a melancholic character you have envisioned here Edvard.
"with nowhere to stay and nowhere to go"
truly a sad predicament poet. Your
romanticism is glowing.
Blessings ...
...WHEN ONE CHANCES TO LEAVE HIS PRESENCE...HE ALWAYS WAITS FOR THEIR RETURN...PATIENTLY...NEVER DEMANDING...HE WAITS...AND WHEN THE WORLD'S PUNISHMENT BECOMES 'ENOUGH'...ONE CAN RETURN TO THE OPEN, WAITING ARMS OF HIM...WHO FIRST LOVED THEM. BEAUTIFULLY DONE! I LOVED IT. ALL ELMENTS OF ARTISTRY ARE PRESENT AND DONE SO WELL. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS. JOYCE, HIS INSPIRATIONS
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on July 9, 2009
Wowwwwwww..this is breath taking..you are such a wonderful writer...keep up the great work sweet man...Hugssss
"I am by the river, always I will be there until
the last day, until the last second on the clock", beautiful Georg,,,this is moving...like that river,,stunning!
Christine
I am so touched by the tender beauty of this poem Georg
the honest delivery of emotion just soothes into the depths of my heart...this is so wonderful to feel the devotion of such a love
& yes the tears that come from the knowing of this...and you close your poem with a glorious promise...a wonderful one at that!!
Love & Inspirations
Vickie
This poem is a masterpiece, Georg, such sadness, such emotion, such descriptive passages. I always enjoy reading your work. You are simply amazing.
Much peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
The Matchmaker:
Angela Calminetti, mother of five, New Age practitioner and gifted psychic and telepath, is proud of her family ties and does everything she can to make sure that all of her younger siblings are as happy in love and marriage
The Matchmaker:
Angela Calminetti, mother of five, New Age practitioner and gifted psychic and telepath, is proud of her family ties and does everything she can to make sure that all of her younger siblings are as happy in love and marriage
Cynthia
This one takes the breath away, held me in my chair till the last word
Wonderfully penned, I enjoyed
The Buzzard
EDWIN
Eileen
"with nowhere to stay and nowhere to go"
truly a sad predicament poet. Your
romanticism is glowing.
Blessings ...
Regis
the last day, until the last second on the clock", beautiful Georg,,,this is moving...like that river,,stunning!
Christine
In Spirit,
Bear
chains broke. So many of us are prisoners with invisible chains.
the honest delivery of emotion just soothes into the depths of my heart...this is so wonderful to feel the devotion of such a love
& yes the tears that come from the knowing of this...and you close your poem with a glorious promise...a wonderful one at that!!
Love & Inspirations
Vickie
Much peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :(