Have you in your life hold a wet bird between your hands, or an helpless kitten or a little puppy sleeping on your arms?
That's the way a loving man should hold the woman he loves, always...
José Feliciano was telling on that song above
“listen to the falling rain, listen to it fall, and
with every drop of rain I can hear your call…”
The fingers or the pouring rain were
tap dancing on the fogged glass
of your window, like all our tears
were put together for one very last time,
before they were converted in wet smiles.
Listen my love,
listen to the falling rain…
Thunders, shaking shadows in my world,
piercing lightning, like slashing knives,
we left back that, the mightiest storm
that twisted the core of our lives
until it was nothing left inside our hearts.
Listen my love,
listen to the falling rain…
Tomorrow when the storms are gone
rainbows will be left to cover the past,
as kisses rosebuds will appear in the garden
that a merciless rain blessed had,
on the soul of two secret lovers apart.
Listen my love,
listen to the falling rain…
Like a little wet sparrow suddenly you,
are trembling of cold between my hands,
as the drops of fate rain are pouring
trying to drown our wish to keep alive
our love, that destiny stabbed and will not die.
Listen my love,
listen to the falling rain…
Georg, how beautiful! How positively beautiful. Words crafted as though from within the heart of a valentine. Beautiful, sad, thundering with emotion. This one I feel, my friend, this one I truly feel.
Your friend, Mark
WOW Georg!
This amazing Poem wretched at my heart!
It was filled with such BEAUTY but felt so sad within the lines!
Leaving me achy and sad and haunted!
I love this poem! YOU created and the picture is a gem!
Listen my love, listen to the falling rain...
Such Ahhhh....
WRITE ON!
*You have style and pizazz and A romantic at heart you sure are!
Blessings, Peace and WARM Hugs, Purple_Passion_Pulsing, SHEExooo
As rain kisses the parched ground, your romantic, poetic words spark our souls, Georg. Beautifully written, enticingly read, friend.
Blessings and Love - Micke
Georg my friend the last thing I wanted to hear was more falling rain, it hasn't stopped here all sommer, it'll probably rain all winter too, and that little sparrow will get never away from the cold misery, or whatever you're holding, but just the same, what lovely thoughts you're thinking, like a ray of sunshine......
Hugs! Jasmin Horst
...FOR FROM THE RAIN DROPS COME AN ECHOS....FILLED WITH WORDS OF ENCOURAGEMT...FOR OUR LOVE. THIS IS A WELL WRITTEN WORK WITH GREAT IMAGERY. THANKS FOR SHARING AND GOD BLESS. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
You nailed this one buddy, between your brilliant analogies, vivid images and strong emotional tugs on the heart you created a master piece...well done and a keeper.
fee
Georg, such tenderness and passion radiate throughout this amazing poem. I am in awe of your talent. You are one talented writer!
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
I am held in your beautiful loving words Georg, and it is very beautiful to be within your poetic expressions of love...held by promising tenderness....you are divine emotions
this.... "Love, Listen to the Falling Rain"
Peace, Love & Inspirations
Vickie
Have you in your life hold a wet bird between your hands, or a helpless kitten or a little puppy sleeping on your arms?
That's the way a loving man should hold the woman he loves, always...
Shirine McVey discovers that twenty years of her life have elapsed since she went to sleep in a hotel room in El Paso, Texas. And worse, she is married to a man she doesn't know.
Love is universal and not limited to the most perfect among us. In this collection of romantic short stories and poetry, love comes to those who are decidedly imperfect, who possess very real human flaws, scars, and challenges. Awaiting us as we are.
Your friend, Mark
This amazing Poem wretched at my heart!
It was filled with such BEAUTY but felt so sad within the lines!
Leaving me achy and sad and haunted!
I love this poem! YOU created and the picture is a gem!
Listen my love, listen to the falling rain...
Such Ahhhh....
WRITE ON!
*You have style and pizazz and A romantic at heart you sure are!
Blessings, Peace and WARM Hugs, Purple_Passion_Pulsing, SHEExooo
Blessed are those that feel the energy of the realms of love, and live to diffuse its grace.
May many emulate de message that "Love, Listen to the Falling Rain" etches on the Scroll of life.
Much gratitude to the author of "Love, Listen to the Falling Rain" for sharing this message of love in poetic wonder.
In appreciation,
Dixie Dawn Michelle
Blessings and Love - Micke
anyone resist the the falling rain? -gene.
Great write Georg, I enjoyed
Have a great day
The Buzzard
Hugs! Jasmin Horst
Walt
Blessings ...
Carole~
fee
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
this.... "Love, Listen to the Falling Rain"
Peace, Love & Inspirations
Vickie
Newfie hugs, Rose
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D
That's the way a loving man should hold the woman he loves, always...
You teach us well, Love Guru.
EDWIN