On the sand (ku) (poem) by Georg E Mateos on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on November 26, 2009

Lovely...also full of sad memories...
Love, Ankin

Reviewed on November 24, 2009

Beautifully etched, Georg~ I can see, the sunset as she slowly sets to hesitate on horizons' plane, for another wave to, not erase. . . but go forward with a thin layer of her liquid soul to only glisten more the meaning behind the name...there..."On the sand. . . "

See what Ku did to me! :)
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on November 24, 2009

So much meaning in so few words! Just exquisite, Bro Georg!

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on November 23, 2009

A script that breathes from the heart...beautiful Georg

Reviewed by Gene Williamson

Reviewed on November 23, 2009

True love, I'm told, survives the sands of time.
Beautifully writ, Georg. -gene.

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on November 23, 2009

forever in the sands of life and sunsets of eternity is the lover's name penned in warm blood by tender, yielded flesh. Glorious tattoo and sacred scar, Georg! :)) XX

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Reviewed on November 23, 2009

A good metaphor here Edvard.
And how sweet what Liana said.
Blessings ...
r

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)

Reviewed on November 23, 2009

Beautiful in its subtlety.

Reviewed by J'nia Fowler

Reviewed on November 23, 2009

Beautiful Georg. Hugs, J'nia

Reviewed by Emile Tubiana

Reviewed on November 23, 2009

Dear Georg, I am happy to discover your loving heart. Love Emile

Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER

Reviewed on November 23, 2009

A gift, washed by the eternal sea, Hugs! Jasmin Horst

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on November 23, 2009

To have your name written by such a noble heart, is a priceless gift. Such beauty expressed in so few words Georg.

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on November 23, 2009

You capture the fleeting memories of love in this one...and I mean fleeting in the sense that although we love forever...our time is always too short on this world.
fee

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on November 23, 2009

I think you always write with your heart, brother, whether it be on sand, paper, or keyboard.

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

Reviewed on November 23, 2009

THESE SENTENCES COULD WRITE ONLY OMAR KHAYYAM AND ONLY YOU, GEORG MATEOS!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on November 23, 2009

Beautiful and touching write, Georg, with a hint of sadness. Very well penned; bravo!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :(

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

Reviewed on November 23, 2009

have you ever had your heart held Georg?
You write like you have...
I made sand angels..same concept as snow angels
just a tad more work :)
Embracing & Lovely...
Peace, Love & Inspirations
Vickie