It should have been Criticism written in the category slot, because inspirational would have been for those that don't want to hear no more the same lies that has been said to perpetuate the staying in power the master that the American people so gladly raise to protect when anyone tries to take their chains away.
Reduced to dust are the marble thoughts
that were the fundaments of the greedy
builders of political cathedrals
where man worshipped gods
with feet made of clay
and hearts full of bloody falsehood.
The Nation has buried a million soldiers
since that day in Plymouth Rock
for the mere survival of the few salesmen
of snake-oil with mouths full
of impossible of achieving promises
and pockets full of wishes for gold.
Seeing painful despair on the face of yesterday
frowning is tomorrow because
the future was promised to be bright
by the shadows chasers with many mantras
that mesmerize the obedient mice so,
the cats in peace all of them go and swallow.
In the calendar of man we should have had
the Age of Charlatans with Applause
two thousand and ten years after hearing the truth
we still are in the lenders grip, them calling us
to witness their sacrilegious mass
where the Golden Calf can be behold.
The infirm will be abandoned like in those times
of global pest all of them was,
homelessness was created by
euthanasia of all family values for a profit
and children living in the sewers
trying to escape from man and winter’s cold.
Reduced to dust are the hopes of many
as the few, like King Midas, go for it all,
looking down to the world burning to ashes
for shareholders sake not to get poor
forgetting fat camels don’t go through needles eyes
and that pockets haven’t no use by God.
FIRST - I WOULD ECHO AMBER'S REQUEST - RETURN TO USA - RUN FOR PRESIDENT - YOU GOT MY VOTE! YOU HAVE ALL THE NECESSARY INGREDIENTS - EXPERIENCE, KNOWLEDGE, PASSION, UNDERSTANDING, EMPATHY, AND LAST, BUT NOT LEAST ... AGE!
SECOND - YOU ARE TOO KIND, CALLING 'THEM' - CHARLATANS - I AM LESS SUBTLE AND CALL ALL THOSE GREEDY SONS O' BITCHES - "RAT-BASTARDS!"
It is obvious (and better said by the others) that your heart is in the right place. But, what moves me is how your mind connects with that heart to create art.
"with feet made of clay"
This phrase is reminiscent of
a prophecy in the Book of Daniel
that describes a revived Roman empire
This is one of your best fulminations Edvard.
Enjoyed!
richard the norse
Dear Georg, if we have to search for everything that is wrong, the world is full of it. I prefer to focus my thoughts on the beauty, the peaceful, the productive, the positive actions, and particularly on everything that brings me closer to my happiness. Love Emile
Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
Reviewed on February 27, 2010
powerful write my friend, it never stops amazing me how one can mezmerise the masses. LadyJ
STANDING ON THE OUTSIDE LOOKING IN, ONE CAN HARDLY KNOW BUT, I AM LED TO REMEMBER THAT, THESE DAYS, THE ONLY THING REAL IS 'JESUS'....AND HAD NOT THE PRESENT TIMES BEEN PHROPHESIED EONS AGO, I WOULD BE SURPRISED HOWEVER, THIS IS NOT THE CASE...STILL...KNOWING THAT GOD IS ALWAYS IN CHARGE CAN GIVE US THAT PEACE THAT SURPASSES ALL UNDERSTANDING NO MATTER WHAT IS GOING ON. I LIKE THE WAY YOU VENT GEORG, YOU DO IT SO VERY WELL. THANKS FOR SHARING AND GOD BLESS YOU. LOVE, JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
As one who has worked in the church all my life, I love your words. It angers me when I see the charlatans. It gives a bad name to the rest of us who try to pass on the "truth."
Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Reviewed on February 26, 2010
You're singing my tune on all these issues. An extraordinary piece. A flaming diatribe setting the record straight once and for all with force and clarity!!
Georg i love this piece
and i agreed with your
Beautiful words of wisdom
Yea Georg move to the US
Me think a Wounded Eagle could be do a better job
Powerful and all so true!
Wishing You Peace Love and Light...Yolie
as always Georg you offer many insightful perspectives
spoken inside your poetries
and they are all superb wisdoms of truths
…if only emotional wealth paid all the bills…
but those charlatans…oh those charlatans
the impoverishments of their souls as an empty vault
alone as their thieving greed destroys century after century…
Love & Blessings
Vickie
GLIMPSE OF AN ANGEL IS NOW AVAILABLE. A PORTION OF ALL SALES WILL GO TO HOSPICE TO THUS ENABLE THEM TO HELP OTHERS WHO ARE SOON TO PASS TO THE OTHER SIDE. NO LONGER AVAILABLE.
FIRST - I WOULD ECHO AMBER'S REQUEST - RETURN TO USA - RUN FOR PRESIDENT - YOU GOT MY VOTE! YOU HAVE ALL THE NECESSARY INGREDIENTS - EXPERIENCE, KNOWLEDGE, PASSION, UNDERSTANDING, EMPATHY, AND LAST, BUT NOT LEAST ... AGE!
SECOND - YOU ARE TOO KIND, CALLING 'THEM' - CHARLATANS - I AM LESS SUBTLE AND CALL ALL THOSE GREEDY SONS O' BITCHES - "RAT-BASTARDS!"
THIRD - SEMPER FIDELIS !!! TOM.
This phrase is reminiscent of
a prophecy in the Book of Daniel
that describes a revived Roman empire
This is one of your best fulminations Edvard.
Enjoyed!
richard the norse
Brilliantly composed, you share with us the truth.
Peace be on to us all
William
and i agreed with your
Beautiful words of wisdom
Yea Georg move to the US
Me think a Wounded Eagle could be do a better job
Powerful and all so true!
Wishing You Peace Love and Light...Yolie
This is very powerful and full of much truth.
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
spoken inside your poetries
and they are all superb wisdoms of truths
…if only emotional wealth paid all the bills…
but those charlatans…oh those charlatans
the impoverishments of their souls as an empty vault
alone as their thieving greed destroys century after century…
Love & Blessings
Vickie