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Sandi Lyn Schraut

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Reveal the Gold
by Sandi Lyn Schraut → (All Poetry by Sandi Lyn Schraut)
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A companion poem to "Walls"


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Between the two of us there is
A wall built brick by brick that is
Preventing full disclosure of
The one inside I say I love

I am anxious, awaiting what I’ll see
When you reveal yourself to me
I yearn to see each brick come down
‘til all lay heaped upon on the ground

I know I see the gleam of gold
For between the cracks a light has shown
What is there I want to see
So take a chance babe, set it free!

Your love for me is truly splendid
But walls prevent its full surrender
Please let me bathe in loves true fire
and together we’ll walk till time expires

  

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 Reviews of "Reveal the Gold"
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on October 16, 2005
Nicely done.

Reviewed by Tami Ryan
Reviewed on October 15, 2005
Whew, how well I relate. This is an excellent piece, Sandi.

Tami

Reviewed by Richard Christopher Suarez (Reader)
Reviewed on October 14, 2005
Sandie, you worked this one.
Fantastic and really well expressed!
peace and joy',
Rich Criso

Reviewed on October 14, 2005
The break wall sometimes works as a protection from outsiders. I have one too.

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed on October 13, 2005

It is poemized under the rhythm of harmony, and sings
its fine voice... "Reveal the Gold" flows beautifully to the
penultimate line...

Healthy Happy Life, Poet!


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

P.S.: Please revise the last line of "Reveal the Gold".


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