pure white sand (poem) by Josephine M Bohen on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)

Reviewed on July 11, 2002

Wonderful moment, wonderful write--thank you for sharing...

Reviewed by Sharon Williamson (Reader)

Reviewed on July 10, 2002

I love this. I coukld almost feel that white sand under my toes.
Great write my friend,
Sharon;)

Reviewed by krissy

Reviewed on July 10, 2002

makes me miss my old digs..i grew up in the huntington beach area of california. surfing, skiing, sandcastles, fishing off the end of the pier, (yup..even scoutin guys) in a 65 mustang convertable and an attitude. wow..thanks. i needed the visual. and the memory.
hugs a lot
krissy

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on July 10, 2002

7-10-02

The Power Of The (Your) Mind!

TRASK

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on July 10, 2002

very lucid, percise poem...

Reviewed by Dan Zuewski (Reader)

Reviewed on July 10, 2002

This is spectacular. You sure have a gift with detail and vibrant imagery. I'm off to read some more of your work. Thanks for commenting on mine :)

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on July 10, 2002

I was there thanks to your vivd descriptions, and I love the way you appreciate that it was "made
especially for me to enjoy" ...well done;-)

Reviewed by Serena Stephano (Reader)

Reviewed on July 10, 2002

wow, this was very vivid. I can tell you surely love the beach...and your children as well.

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg

Reviewed on July 10, 2002

*smile* this is so wonderful...i can smell that beach air........

debby

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson

Reviewed on July 10, 2002

this is such a wonderfully sweet write....the imagery...and the feel
you did this one!!!
nicely

Reviewed by Masarat Daud (Reader)

Reviewed on July 10, 2002

Aww..this is so simple and beautiful Aren't beaches just wonderful? They give so much peace and calmness to life. Wonderful write hun!

Reviewed by Scada (Reader)

Reviewed on July 10, 2002

Can I come and live with you?

Scada

Reviewed by D. Enise

Reviewed on July 10, 2002

Oh Josie!!
This is so incredibly BEAUTIFUL!!
I could see it all, and I could feel it!!
I would say the muse Chris sent "is" being most especially kind, and lending herself to your talant!!
*hugs*!
~Jen

Reviewed by D. Enise

Reviewed on July 10, 2002

Sometimes I don't like the sand as it gets between my toes, but I like the feel of it. Great.

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on July 10, 2002

WONDERFUL! Wish I was close to the beach. :) Thanks for a beautiful poem! Enjoyed the images...(((HUGS))) and Love, Karla. :)

Reviewed by Chris Stevens (Reader)

Reviewed on July 10, 2002

wonderful wrtie Josie!!!!!!.... it sure looks like the muse kicked in!!!!! lol
hugs,
Chris

Reviewed by Amor Sabor

Reviewed on July 10, 2002

Pure delight!!! The images projected me into the scene you painted. I saw and felt the wonder of this piece.
Amor