go to jail (poem) by Josephine M Bohen on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on August 15, 2002

Darling, just buy up the orange & red corner properties, you will CONQUER!!! All your other sentiments here are very cool & noble. If a few less people cheated & stole, more people would be happier all around. At the end of the day integrity is all we have...K.K.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on July 19, 2002

I like to there there is more of us out there then we think. It certainly appears that way when getting to know people here. Good write and okay I admit I was good at monopoly but in life I am like you.

Reviewed by ♥ Kari Hirshey ♥ (Reader)

Reviewed on July 18, 2002

I like your style... I never won at monopoly, either!!! lol

Reviewed by Scada (Reader)

Reviewed on July 18, 2002

So many parallels between games and reality. Great write Josie,

Love Scada

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on July 17, 2002

I love your humor and integrity....

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on July 17, 2002

Love it...

Reviewed by Steve Patterson

Reviewed on July 17, 2002

sorry i haven't read you more.... kindamy vise....by the way i love "blurps"...i call em "dittys"...just words thrown at the page. i promise i'll read you more. deal. deal.me

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on July 17, 2002

I used to play that game for hours when I was a kid. It was interesting....but like you said, I wasn't and still am not good at monopoly either.

Sandie Angel :o) / May Lu $*_*$

Reviewed by Masarat Daud (Reader)

Reviewed on July 17, 2002

Oh boy tell me abt it. I'd be so happy when I'd get that "Don't pay fines for jail" or something like that...lol :)

Reviewed by m w

Reviewed on July 17, 2002

Imagine giving up who we are - priceless in our creation - for mere money, the stuff of human creation. Imagine trading the devine for the corrupt.
Christ said it best
Give unto Caesar what is Caesar's (money)
Give unot God what is God's (your soul)
BTW one of the most misused pasages from the bible to justify tithing - what in the world does God need with money anyway?

So I guess you can see your poem got me all riled up :) Well Done

Reviewed by Inam Khaskheli (Reader)

Reviewed on July 17, 2002

very nice peace of work

Reviewed by Chris Stevens (Reader)

Reviewed on July 17, 2002

another great write!!!!!.. I love it!!!!!!.... they never let me win either!!!!! lol
hugs,
Chris

Reviewed by Ed Lupinacci (Reader)

Reviewed on July 17, 2002

least us not forget luxury tax where nothing comes without a price. And whats up with free parking What world is that from.
oh hell im going to play "Sorry" now that a real part of life.